Open Mic: Abstract State of Mind (Wordplay) |
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dalinquent 
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 Topic: Abstract State of Mind (Wordplay)Posted: 03 December 2007 at 8:13pm |
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This is just a keystyle...May record it later as a freeverse...Shit, Might get bored and write 3 more verses, make it a track...lol...Enjoy
Yo, Dal be eclipsing them so called ''hits'' ya dropping... I musta swallowed a battery, Cause damn, All of my shit is shocken Therefore, You can not win...I see the bitch in you now Personal shit blew minds, Well this time it's just typical dal Spitting that wild shit, See I can still write them banging hits I'm like neglectful baby sitters, Naw, I ain't changing shit Yo, My basic scripts, 'll have ya down and under right Have you tryna leave dog, Like you was that bounty hunters wife You should bow before me, ight? Refused so ya got hurt And I made you run away bitch, Like you was Julia Roberts Truly ya not worth, My punches will smash on you rookies I'm Dope...That's something that ya ass never could be You wanna battle, I'm good, See stats don't mean nothing to me An I ain't allergic to felines, So you cats dont be fucking with me I'm so much of a beast, Yea bitch, I'm known to blaze the mic Plus, I'll put you up on hot singles, Like an online dating site |
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Fatal
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...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
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Posted: 03 December 2007 at 8:53pm |
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Nice...
flow was pretty good throughout and like some of the plays..i dont know if the UK heads will get the bounty hunter line but was original...closer was dope...keep up negro
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 03 December 2007 at 9:11pm |
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yeah flash we got dog the bounter hunter over here too :D
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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dalinquent
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Posted: 04 December 2007 at 3:37am |
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thanks fa feeding...more appreciated
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2smooth
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Posted: 04 December 2007 at 10:22am |
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closer was ill... overall, good fluent plays... keep it up son... |
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dalinquent
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Posted: 04 December 2007 at 4:15pm |
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thanks fa feeding
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Posted: 05 December 2007 at 12:29am |
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Edited by 2smooth - 05 December 2007 at 11:23am |
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dalinquent
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Posted: 05 December 2007 at 12:32am |
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dude, your about to be banned...well not now, but when a mod gets on...advertising ain't allowed...
oh yea, fuck you...lol...what you mean it could be better...dopeness like this is hard to come accross nowadays...dont be a hater...lmao |
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Swift Styles
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Posted: 05 December 2007 at 12:35am |
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(^ohhh sucka u on thin ice...)
i peeped his earlier so ima say something about it now i guess.
dope drop nice closer
liked the rookie/could be bar
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