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    Posted: 06 September 2006 at 9:02am
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due to stalin backin out....

this is now the final to the tourny

rules have been changed to unlimited lines
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 October 2006 at 4:46pm
am sorry bout the dely - but vote the hell up

i-Kontinue:


Originally posted by i-Kontinue i-Kontinue wrote:

THINK while you read this� I'm not explaining shit.. If you don't get something, then I don't want you to vote anyway... Only thing ya'll might need to know is he said he doesnt listen to rap... more rock... and Punk is a type of rock music. punk = scared*





Yeah,
Ya moved to Romania just to get with ya hoe, so
This PUSSY is pussy whipped� like a lesbian homo
A threat �n you�ll no show, yet you swear ya bad �n ya big
The fact of it is� I ONLY TALKED TO YOU FOR AVYS AND SIGS (thanks!)
Damaged ya wit� punches, ain�t lettin� that shit slide
You won't vote against ya crew? What more proof that ya dick ride?
You bitch. Why? �Cus of the fact I gotchu duckin' ma calls
I�ll just assume ya peN is dry �cus Nep is suckin� ya balls
Ya frontin�, c�mon� All ya claims don�t fill in the gap
Why ya register L.A. if you don�t listen to rap?! (�fuck outta here)
This bitch can�t relax: We all know you hide your age
And there�s nooo explanation dogg� Besides you�re gay!
Ya rhymes are plays� and indeed ya lines are played
Dude�s gotta explain EVERYTHING he�s tryna say (�cuz it�s forced�)
Ya types are straight av�rage�There�s no cue to ya junk
Fuck ya music preference, dudes already knew you were Punk* (oooooooweeee)
Threw to the dump� given up a fest to the crows
And ya �cleanin �shit� up?�?� think� You forgettin� ya flow! (iiiit's shitty)
Yes �n ya know� Ya left, and I�ll admit I was mad
But if that�s all you�ve gotten on me then that SHIT IS JUST SAD!
Flippin� ya lands!� It�s almost like I taught you ya lines
�EVEN YOU ADMITTED THAT YOUR STYLE WAS TRACED OFF OF MINE!
Aimin� ya eyes at him� YOU�LL be seein� the fake:
When Nep recruited, even SMOOTH thought you were bein� a snake... (True Story...)
Ya easy as cake the way all my punches landing on ya, and�
This ain�t the first time we seen "Game drop a Bomber, man"
Plus� Ya can�t defend the way I hurt ya�ll dudes
...Bomb ain�t "dropped no serious damage" since in World War Two
It�s Ikon verse who? How is it sooo suspenseful?
Battled �GAINST a NOVICE rank, and got a vote AGAINST you! (Pro?!)
Hence� you ain�t a rival. Tec�s (text) spray like a gun?
I-kontinue to call you "Junior"...Why? Ya still gettin� "sonned"
Layed in the dump with text� no resolute to pull�
You're second J wit' "forced plays", and always "shoot for Bull"

BOOM


UnaBomber:
Originally posted by UnaBomber UnaBomber wrote:

Im expecting to see alot of link's lol.. Anyway.. Fuck the expo's.. Don't get it? don't fucking vote & ruin the battle, it's just like this..
 
..Im the diffrence between us, a Master with each phrase
Plus i stay hot 'weather' or not you asked for a heatwave (whether)
Let me rephrase.. Fuck Game, i'll get rid of ya crew
'An engrave "Junior" across ya face as my 'signature move'...
 
Your's truely,
 
       Junior Shade..
 
 
Aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight..
 
Summin' smell's bad!, i'll kick your team & there odor
Cus' the 'Game's finished' now like the "Cricket season is over!"..

Why'd i join The Dynasty?, sympathy for you!
Ya clique's dope? your sick? both simply are not true
Your wimpy, so's ya crew, there chump's your'a faggot
I'll eat this 'shrimp' in more ways than "Bubba Gump could imagine"
Ya shit'll get battered, text ripped up an scattered
Kon couldn't 'hang with me in the ring' if we kicked it on Saturn!
It wont happen cus' your talent's hardly elite bro
Una's got Game 'dread-in'a loss' like "Bob Marley in kemo"
Darn'it your weak flow ain't nice it's missin' G
He could be'a 'virgin birth' an' still not have'a "tight delivery"
Kon love's my swagger, he'll be feelin' this fist too 
It's like Game's 'saving magazine's' he's got "serious issues!"
Straight k-o this gimmick, who's text we don't mention
Cus' when you write im 'pushing bored' like'a legless veteran
Fuck The Dynasty G.. You can't manage'a DOPE team
Plus, Battling J's a 'hell of'a gamble' like'a "satanic slot machine"
Drop your fake personals, it's fact they aint landing
Game ain't sick.. That's why he drafted in hanGing
Kid your no vet, infact your lame with the text
I'll just open ya throat like'a window your'a "pane" in the neck (Pain)
Game'll get wrecked cus' his dissing is lame
Never thought much of you, like i was "missing my brain"
I'll eat up an' maim him with the neat'est of flames
Kid's think im 'Miami's coach driver'.. I bring "Heat to the Game"
Assassin's are dope, peeps hate it cus im notably sick
Kon the 'writings on the wall' for you like your Dynasty sig (Crew Page)
Shit your weak an' what you speak & preach is past it
Junior's 'out the reach of kid's' like "bleach an' tablets".. [Sup Kon?]
My whole clique is dope, we drop sublime theme's
While your's is "clueless" like 'Rookie Cop's at crime scene's'
You've never been fire well Una's bar's are hell
Kon couldn't be 'Inn-credible' as'a "five'star hotel"..  ;)
Junior's praised, he get's props, but Game? his best flop's
Tracks would'nt "make'a kick underground" with'a basement sweatshop
I'll detach your limbs.. Leave your back in split's
Toss your arm's in the river..... Catch the drift?!
I'll smash your shit, leave you fucked up on crutches
It's fact brah "I pack more name's then you pack punches"
You can't jack, touch this cus' Game force's an' more
His flow's 'dead on arrival' like "corpses in morgues!"
I'll make you forfeit of course, Junior's short fuzed
No-one's 'hearing you Kon' except the "court room" (Con)
I'll thwart you, Game'll get left in blood & bone's
When my stunning flow's "air Kon" like summer home's.. (Con)
 
 
Junior Aka UnaBomber..
 
Assassins..
 
 
- The Janitor
'cleaning shit up', think..
 
I'll chuck ya guts in my freezer & call that 'organ-iced' crime..
 

Ohh wait..
..So now my bar's are unleashed, we see Game's far from a beast
An' next time you 'open up to me' i'll make you wear ya "heart on ya sleeve!" ;)
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 October 2006 at 5:50pm
DAAAAMMMMM!!!!
 
Aight heres the breakdown
 
,;ikon;,
 
Flow was sick through out the whole entire spit, I was feeling that man, structure was in-tact and everything fell into place like it should. Punchlines were hittin hard.
 
~Verse Break Down~
 
Damaged ya wit� punches, ain�t lettin� that shit slide
You won't vote against ya crew? What more proof that ya dick ride?
^^ That was sick^^ Nice visual/Personal
 
I�ll just assume ya peN is dry �cus Nep is suckin� ya balls
^^ Liked the pen, nep switch up, originalty ^^
 
Ya rhymes are plays� and indeed ya lines are played
Dude�s gotta explain EVERYTHING he�s tryna say (�cuz it�s forced�)
^^ Nice Personal Hit^^
 
Ya types are straight av�rage�There�s no cue to ya junk
Fuck ya music preference, dudes already knew you were Punk*
^^Ouch, Very Nice^^
 
Threw to the dump� given up a fest to the crows
And ya �cleanin �shit� up?�?� think� You forgettin� ya flow
^^Joke on the janitor, Nice Personal Hit again^^
 
Ya easy as cake the way all my punches landing on ya, and�
This ain�t the first time we seen "Game drop a Bomber, man"
^^Boom!!^^
 
Battled �GAINST a NOVICE rank, and got a vote AGAINST you! (Pro?!)
^^Lol thats sad, should have been a 3-0, Nice Personal^^
 
Nice Drop
 
#############################################
 
,;Una;,
 
Dam dude nice drop, your flow was sick, and like ikon ur structure was also in-tact, good personal hits, nice use of mulits
 
~Verse Break Down~
 
Your wimpy, so's ya crew, there chump's your'a faggot
I'll eat this 'shrimp' in more ways than "Bubba Gump could imagine
^^ lol bubba gump, nice punch^^
 
Ya shit'll get battered, text ripped up an scattered
Kon couldn't 'hang with me in the ring' if we kicked it on Saturn!
^^Solid punch, nice creativty^^
 
Darn'it your weak flow ain't nice it's missin' G
He could be'a 'virgin birth' an' still not have'a "tight delivery
^^Another nice punch^^
 
Kon love's my swagger, he'll be feelin' this fist too 
It's like Game's 'saving magazine's' he's got "serious issues!"
^^Ouch^^
 
I'll eat up an' maim him with the neat'est of flames
Kid's think im 'Miami's coach driver'.. I bring "Heat to the Game"
^^Swooooot!! Nice!!^^
 
You've never been fire well Una's bar's are hell
Kon couldn't be 'Inn-credible' as'a "five'star hotel"..  ;)
^^Dope^^
 
I'll make you forfeit of course, Junior's short fuzed
No-one's 'hearing you Kon' except the "court room" (Con)
^^Dope, Nice Creativity^^
 
So now my bar's are unleashed, we see Game's far from a beast
An' next time you 'open up to me' i'll make you wear ya "heart on ya sleeve!" ;) ^^DOPE!!^^
 
Nice Drop
 
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Flow- Ikon
Structure- tie
Multi- tie
Personals- Ikon
Creativity - Una
Open- Ikon
Finish -Una
 
Overall Vote-Ikon for better flow, personal hits and a better opener
 
Best of luck to the both of you, Im out
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Cool shit I-kon.. Pretty much what i expected..

Personally this should be a race to 5 vote's, cus i know the herb's will be here first (Sorry Pro, decent brakedown) & it deserves some quality vote's from quality head's..
 
Surely this is hall of fame shit...
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Game

Ya moved to Romania just to get with ya hoe, so
This PUSSY is pussy whipped� like a lesbian homo
^^^  nice idea... wasnt feelin it tho, lesbian homo is redundant...

A threat �n you�ll no show, yet you swear ya bad �n ya big
The fact of it is� I ONLY TALKED TO YOU FOR AVYS AND SIGS (thanks!)
^decent personal with an ok multi

Damaged ya wit� punches, ain�t lettin� that shit slide
You won't vote against ya crew? What more proof that ya dick ride?
^^despite what Prophecy says... this bar was gay... good personal... but you didnt do anything with it

You bitch. Why? �Cus of the fact I gotchu duckin' ma calls
I�ll just assume ya peN is dry �cus Nep is suckin� ya balls
^^^ Nice... by far the best bar in ur verse...

Ya frontin�, c�mon� All ya claims don�t fill in the gap
Why ya register L.A. if you don�t listen to rap?! (�fuck outta here)
^^^ mediocre line

This bitch can�t relax: We all know you hide your age
And there�s nooo explanation dogg� Besides you�re gay!
^^^ lame

Ya rhymes are plays� and indeed ya lines are played
Dude�s gotta explain EVERYTHING he�s tryna say (�cuz it�s forced�)
^^^  lame

Ya types are straight av�rage�There�s no cue to ya junk
Fuck ya music preference, dudes already knew you were Punk* (oooooooweeee)
^^^ first line is dumb.... but second line is a pretty tight personal/punch

Threw to the dump� given up a fest to the crows
And ya �cleanin �shit� up?�?� think� You forgettin� ya flow! (iiiit's shitty)
^^^ first line, ehhh... second was pretty good personal/punch

Yes �n ya know� Ya left, and I�ll admit I was mad
But if that�s all you�ve gotten on me then that SHIT IS JUST SAD!
^^^ ehhh nothin special

Flippin� ya lands!
� It�s almost like I taught you ya lines
�EVEN YOU ADMITTED THAT YOUR STYLE WAS TRACED OFF OF MINE!
^^^ so-so personal... if its true

Aimin� ya eyes at him� YOU�LL be seein� the fake:
When Nep recruited, even SMOOTH thought you were bein� a snake... (True Story...)
^^^ decent personal

Ya easy as cake the way all my punches landing on ya, and�
This ain�t the first time we seen "Game drop a Bomber, man"
^^^ second best bar

Plus� Ya can�t defend the way I hurt ya�ll dudes
...Bomb ain�t "dropped no serious damage" since in World War Two
^^^ not feelin it... poor setup for second line

It�s Ikon verse who? How is it sooo suspenseful?
Battled �GAINST a NOVICE rank, and got a vote AGAINST you! (Pro?!)
^^^ pretty good personal... nice

Hence� you ain�t a rival. Tec�s (text) spray like a gun?
I-kontinue to call you "Junior"...Why? Ya still gettin� "sonned"
^^^ first line- ehhh......  second line is good

Layed in the dump with text� no resolute to pull�
You're second J wit' "forced plays", and always "shoot for Bull"
^^^ nice idea... just not feelin it... "shoot for bull"????  kinda forcin shit to work for ya there

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UNA


Summin' smell's bad!, i'll kick your team & there odor
Cus' the 'Game's finished' now like the "Cricket season is over!"..
^^^  ehh, decent, coulda been better

Why'd i join The Dynasty?, sympathy for you!
Ya clique's dope? your sick? both simply are not true
^^^ nothin special
Your wimpy, so's ya crew, there chump's your'a faggot
I'll eat this 'shrimp' in more ways than "Bubba Gump could imagine"
^^^ nice bar
Ya shit'll get battered, text ripped up an scattered
Kon couldn't 'hang with me in the ring' if we kicked it on Saturn!
^^^ good bar
It wont happen cus' your talent's hardly elite bro
Una's got Game 'dread-in'a loss' like "Bob Marley in kemo"
^^^REAL TIGHT
Darn'it your weak flow ain't nice it's missin' G
He could be'a 'virgin birth' an' still not have'a "tight delivery"
^^^ another tight line... lol
Kon love's my swagger, he'll be feelin' this fist too 
It's like Game's 'saving magazine's' he's got "serious issues!"
^^^ decent punch/multi
Straight k-o this gimmick, who's text we don't mention
Cus' when you write im 'pushing bored' like'a legless veteran
^^ decent wordplay
Fuck The Dynasty G.. You can't manage'a DOPE team
Plus, Battling J's a 'hell of'a gamble' like'a "satanic slot machine"
^^^ ehhh not feelin it
Drop your fake personals, it's fact they aint landing
Game ain't sick.. That's why he drafted in hanGing
^^^ good punch/personal
Kid your no vet, infact your lame with the text
I'll just open ya throat like'a window your'a "pane" in the neck (Pain)
^^^ nice wordplay
Game'll get wrecked cus' his dissing is lame
Never thought much of you, like i was "missing my brain"
^^^ ok
I'll eat up an' maim him with the neat'est of flames
Kid's think im 'Miami's coach driver'.. I bring "Heat to the Game"
^^^ TIGHT... possibly the best bar of the battle
Assassin's are dope
, peeps hate it cus im notably sick
Kon the 'writings on the wall' for you like your Dynasty sig (Crew Page)
^^^ good personal/punch
Shit your weak an' what you speak & preach is past it
Junior's 'out the reach of kid's' like "bleach an' tablets".. [Sup Kon?]
^^^ decent
My whole clique is dope, we drop sublime theme's
While your's is "clueless" like 'Rookie Cop's at crime scene's'
^^^ decent punch
You've never been fire well Una's bar's are hell
Kon couldn't be 'Inn-credible' as'a "five'star hotel"..  ;)
^^^ nice wordplay
Junior's praised, he get's props, but Game? his best flop's
Tracks would'nt "make'a kick underground" with'a basement sweatshop
^^^ ILL PUNCH
I'll detach your limbs.. Leave your back in split's
Toss your arm's in the river..... Catch the drift?!
^^^ tight punch
I'll smash your shit, leave you fucked up on crutches
It's fact brah "I pack more name's then you pack punches"
^^^ decent punch
You can't jack, touch this cus' Game force's an' more
His flow's 'dead on arrival' like "corpses in morgues!"
^^ solid
I'll make you forfeit of course, Junior's short fuzed
No-one's 'hearing you Kon' except the "court room" (Con)
^^^ nice wordplay on his name
I'll thwart you, Game'll get left in blood & bone's
When my stunning flow's "air Kon" like summer home's.. (Con)
 ^^^ decent
..So now my bar's are unleashed, we see Game's far from a beast
An' next time you 'open up to me' i'll make you wear ya "heart on ya sleeve!" ;)
^^^ nice multis... decent punch


I give this to UNA....

both had great flow and personals... both came with some tight bars...  BUT... Una had more hard hitting punches...  Game had some sick lines... but he also had some ehhh ones...  and alot of his bars would have weak first lines and nice second ones, while Una had a more consistant level of punches.


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Firstly, stunning battle, maaajor props Game and Bomber...

Ikon...

Ya moved to Romania just to get with ya hoe, so
This PUSSY is pussy whipped� like a lesbian homo
Nice rhyming, not sure about the lesbian homo thing...
A threat �n you�ll no show, yet you swear ya bad �n ya big
The fact of it is� I ONLY TALKED TO YOU FOR AVYS AND SIGS (thanks!)
Hmm.ive seen this kinda punch used a bit...still worked well tho...
Damaged ya wit� punches, ain�t lettin� that shit slide
You won't vote against ya crew? What more proof that ya dick ride?
Nice..good personal
You bitch. Why? �Cus of the fact I gotchu duckin' ma calls
I�ll just assume ya peN is dry �cus Nep is suckin� ya balls
Veery nice line...
Ya frontin�, c�mon� All ya claims don�t fill in the gap
Why ya register L.A. if you don�t listen to rap?! (�fuck outta here)
Pretty good...
This bitch can�t relax: We all know you hide your age
And there�s nooo explanation dogg� Besides you�re gay!
Not feeling this...
Ya rhymes are plays� and indeed ya lines are played
Dude�s gotta explain EVERYTHING he�s tryna say (�cuz it�s forced�)
Ha...nice...
Ya types are straight av�rage�There�s no cue to ya junk
Fuck ya music preference, dudes already knew you were Punk* (oooooooweeee)
Filler first line but killer 2nd...
Threw to the dump� given up a fest to the crows
And ya �cleanin �shit� up?�?� think� You forgettin� ya flow! (iiiit's shitty)
Nice...
Yes �n ya know� Ya left, and I�ll admit I was mad
But if that�s all you�ve gotten on me then that SHIT IS JUST SAD!
Seemed like filler to me...
Flippin� ya lands!� It�s almost like I taught you ya lines
�EVEN YOU ADMITTED THAT YOUR STYLE WAS TRACED OFF OF MINE!
Very good bar...
Aimin� ya eyes at him� YOU�LL be seein� the fake:
When Nep recruited, even SMOOTH thought you were bein� a snake... (True Story...)
Good enough...nice rhyming...
Ya easy as cake the way all my punches landing on ya, and�
This ain�t the first time we seen "Game drop a Bomber, man"
Ooouuuuuuchhh......beauty
Plus� Ya can�t defend the way I hurt ya�ll dudes
...Bomb ain�t "dropped no serious damage" since in World War Two
Really starting to pick up here...
It�s Ikon verse who? How is it sooo suspenseful?
Battled �GAINST a NOVICE rank, and got a vote AGAINST you! (Pro?!)
Ha...
Hence� you ain�t a rival. Tec�s (text) spray like a gun?
I-kontinue to call you "Junior"...Why? Ya still gettin� "sonned"
Beauty...
Layed in the dump with text� no resolute to pull�
You're second J wit' "forced plays", and always "shoot for Bull"
This was nice but could have been better...

Unabomber...

(ncie opening section

Summin' smell's bad!, i'll kick your team & there odor
Cus' the 'Game's finished' now like the "Cricket season is over!"..
Just a starter really, but nice

Why'd i join The Dynasty?, sympathy for you!
Ya clique's dope? your sick? both simply are not true
Your wimpy, so's ya crew, there chump's your'a faggot
I'll eat this 'shrimp' in more ways than "Bubba Gump could imagine"
Nice 4 lines here...first 2 simple but effective
Ya shit'll get battered, text ripped up an scattered
Kon couldn't 'hang with me in the ring' if we kicked it on Saturn!
Dope play..
It wont happen cus' your talent's hardly elite bro
Una's got Game 'dread-in'a loss' like "Bob Marley in kemo"
Once again, really nice play..
Darn'it your weak flow ain't nice it's missin' G
He could be'a 'virgin birth' an' still not have'a "tight delivery"
And again...smooth rhyming too...
Kon love's my swagger, he'll be feelin' this fist too 
It's like Game's 'saving magazine's' he's got "serious issues!"
Hahahahahaha...sick
Straight k-o this gimmick, who's text we don't mention
Cus' when you write im 'pushing bored' like'a legless veteran
Not quite as good...
Fuck The Dynasty G.. You can't manage'a DOPE team
Plus, Battling J's a 'hell of'a gamble' like'a "satanic slot machine"
Very nice once again...
Drop your fake personals, it's fact they aint landing
Game ain't sick.. That's why he drafted in hanGing
Kid your no vet, infact your lame with the text
I'll just open ya throat like'a window your'a "pane" in the neck (Pain)
Nice personal/punch combo here...beautiful play...
Game'll get wrecked cus' his dissing is lame
Never thought much of you, like i was "missing my brain"
I'll eat up an' maim him with the neat'est of flames
Kid's think im 'Miami's coach driver'.. I bring "Heat to the Game"
Stunning set of bars...2nd one your best of the verse...
Assassin's are dope, peeps hate it cus im notably sick
Kon the 'writings on the wall' for you like your Dynasty sig (Crew Page)
Shit your weak an' what you speak & preach is past it
Junior's 'out the reach of kid's' like "bleach an' tablets".. [Sup Kon?]
ONce again, brilliant plays...
My whole clique is dope, we drop sublime theme's
While your's is "clueless" like 'Rookie Cop's at crime scene's'
Filler 1st but fair enough, nice play again
You've never been fire well Una's bar's are hell
Kon couldn't be 'Inn-credible' as'a "five'star hotel"..  ;)
Junior's praised, he get's props, but Game? his best flop's
Tracks would'nt "make'a kick underground" with'a basement sweatshop
Veeery good...
I'll detach your limbs.. Leave your back in split's
Toss your arm's in the river..... Catch the drift?!
I'll smash your shit, leave you fucked up on crutches
It's fact brah "I pack more name's then you pack punches"
You can't jack, touch this cus' Game force's an' more
His flow's 'dead on arrival' like "corpses in morgues!"
I'll make you forfeit of course, Junior's short fuzed
No-one's 'hearing you Kon' except the "court room" (Con)
I'll thwart you, Game'll get left in blood & bone's
When my stunning flow's "air Kon" like summer home's.. (Con)
Every one of these really, really ncie...



Game had more actual direct punches and a tight-assed flow (and the bomberman line was fiiire), but some of Unabomber's plays were absolutely sublime, and the rest were by and large very nice...he inserted just enough personals and nameplays to prevent the verse becoming too generic...I'll have to say, by a fly's penis-length, on the strength of the plays, UnaBomber GMV....




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Ha @ at a fly's penis length^... So vivid

Thanks for the quick, well explained votes so far though... I've read them all actually, (as I usually do) and it seems it came down to a battle of majority personals vs majority wordplay... different styles... As expected... Still upping for votes
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Come on people.. Don't be sleeping on this..

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kon...

Ya moved to Romania just to get with ya hoe, so
This PUSSY is pussy whipped� like a lesbian homo
Meh...kinda played, not up to your usual standard that iv come to expect
A threat �n you�ll no show, yet you swear ya bad �n ya big
The fact of it is� I ONLY TALKED TO YOU FOR AVYS AND SIGS (thanks!)
Not bad, was a personal so it hit
Damaged ya wit� punches, ain�t lettin� that shit slide
You won't vote against ya crew? What more proof that ya dick ride?
Nice..good personal
You bitch. Why? �Cus of the fact I gotchu duckin' ma calls
I�ll just assume ya peN is dry �cus Nep is suckin� ya balls
Dope, nice flip on pen n nep...and it hit
Ya frontin�, c�mon� All ya claims don�t fill in the gap
Why ya register L.A. if you don�t listen to rap?! (�fuck outta here)
Personal...but wasnt much of a punch, more of just a question/statement
This bitch can�t relax: We all know you hide your age
And there�s nooo explanation dogg� Besides you�re gay!
Meh....weak for your standards man
Ya rhymes are plays� and indeed ya lines are played
Dude�s gotta explain EVERYTHING he�s tryna say (�cuz it�s forced�)
Ha...nice...was a personal and it hit nicely
Ya types are straight av�rage�There�s no cue to ya junk
Fuck ya music preference, dudes already knew you were Punk* (oooooooweeee)
Nice, set up was weak but followed through nicely
Threw to the dump� given up a fest to the crows
And ya �cleanin �shit� up?�?� think� You forgettin� ya flow! (iiiit's shitty)
Nice...
Yes �n ya know� Ya left, and I�ll admit I was mad
But if that�s all you�ve gotten on me then that SHIT IS JUST SAD!
Meh
Flippin� ya lands!� It�s almost like I taught you ya lines
�EVEN YOU ADMITTED THAT YOUR STYLE WAS TRACED OFF OF MINE!
Dope punch...if it's true
Aimin� ya eyes at him� YOU�LL be seein� the fake:
When Nep recruited, even SMOOTH thought you were bein� a snake... (True Story...)
Nice, hit and was a personal
Ya easy as cake the way all my punches landing on ya, and�
This ain�t the first time we seen "Game drop a Bomber, man"
hahaha nice, great wordplay
Plus� Ya can�t defend the way I hurt ya�ll dudes
...Bomb ain�t "dropped no serious damage" since in World War Two
Again played off his name and it hit nicely
It�s Ikon verse who? How is it sooo suspenseful?
Battled �GAINST a NOVICE rank, and got a vote AGAINST you! (Pro?!)
Meh...not bad
Hence� you ain�t a rival. Tec�s (text) spray like a gun?
I-kontinue to call you "Junior"...Why? Ya still gettin� "sonned"
Nice
Layed in the dump with text� no resolute to pull�
You're second J wit' "forced plays", and always "shoot for Bull"
This was nice but could have been better...

Unabomber...

Summin' smell's bad!, i'll kick your team & there odor
Cus' the 'Game's finished' now like the "Cricket season is over!"..
Meh....good opener i guess but not hard hittin

Why'd i join The Dynasty?, sympathy for you!
Ya clique's dope? your sick? both simply are not true
Your wimpy, so's ya crew, there chump's your'a faggot
I'll eat this 'shrimp' in more ways than "Bubba Gump could imagine"
Not bad, not the best lines but they hit cos they were personal
Ya shit'll get battered, text ripped up an scattered
Kon couldn't 'hang with me in the ring' if we kicked it on Saturn!
Concepts kinda played but it still hit
It wont happen cus' your talent's hardly elite bro
Una's got Game 'dread-in'a loss' like "Bob Marley in kemo"
really nice play..
Darn'it your weak flow ain't nice it's missin' G
He could be'a 'virgin birth' an' still not have'a "tight delivery"
Meh again concepts played
Kon love's my swagger, he'll be feelin' this fist too
It's like Game's 'saving magazine's' he's got "serious issues!"
lol nice
Straight k-o this gimmick, who's text we don't mention
Cus' when you write im 'pushing bored' like'a legless veteran
Nice
Fuck The Dynasty G.. You can't manage'a DOPE team
Plus, Battling J's a 'hell of'a gamble' like'a "satanic slot machine"
Coulda been better...but was iight
Drop your fake personals, it's fact they aint landing
Game ain't sick.. That's why he drafted in hanGing
Meh...was more a statement than a punch
Kid your no vet, infact your lame with the text
I'll just open ya throat like'a window your'a "pane" in the neck (Pain)
Nice
Game'll get wrecked cus' his dissing is lame
Never thought much of you, like i was "missing my brain"
Meh...again a personal statement not a punch
I'll eat up an' maim him with the neat'est of flames
Kid's think im 'Miami's coach driver'.. I bring "Heat to the Game"
Nice
Assassin's are dope, peeps hate it cus im notably sick
Kon the 'writings on the wall' for you like your Dynasty sig (Crew Page)
Nice
Shit your weak an' what you speak & preach is past it
Junior's 'out the reach of kid's' like "bleach an' tablets".. [Sup Kon?]
Nice
My whole clique is dope, we drop sublime theme's
While your's is "clueless" like 'Rookie Cop's at crime scene's'
lol nice
You've never been fire well Una's bar's are hell
Kon couldn't be 'Inn-credible' as'a "five'star hotel"..  ;)
meh
Junior's praised, he get's props, but Game? his best flop's
Tracks would'nt "make'a kick underground" with'a basement sweatshop
Nice
I'll detach your limbs.. Leave your back in split's
Toss your arm's in the river..... Catch the drift?!
Not bad
I'll smash your shit, leave you fucked up on crutches
It's fact brah "I pack more name's then you pack punches"
hmmm...was iight
You can't jack, touch this cus' Game force's an' more
His flow's 'dead on arrival' like "corpses in morgues!"
nice
I'll make you forfeit of course, Junior's short fuzed
No-one's 'hearing you Kon' except the "court room" (Con)
not bad
I'll thwart you, Game'll get left in blood & bone's
When my stunning flow's "air Kon" like summer home's.. (Con)
Nice

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Overall -
Firstly dope battle by both, both had some nice punches that impressed me, but for me game come with more direct punches and had more than made me think "wow...that hit hard", the bar of the battle was the bomberman bar that was stright fire, wasnt an easy decision at all as Una certaintly held his own in this battle but for me personally game took it with more direct punches.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 October 2006 at 7:30pm
Good battle...
 
I-kon... flow was sick...  Nice rhymes and rhyme-scheme...  Multies and transitional rhymes were nice...  Not much wordplay... but loads of nice personals throughout the verse...  A bit of filler...

UnaBomber... very nice intro...  After that... a poor start to the verse until the wordplay picked up...  Lots and lots of wordplay... some pretty sick... some played or tenuous...  A few nice personals... but too many generic punches...  Rhyme-scheme picked up towards the end...

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Lmao @ KayB saying Meh at 90% of my lines..
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Originally posted by UnaBomber UnaBomber wrote:

Lmao @ KayB saying Meh at 90% of my lines..


90%?..... i said meh to 5 of your lines....

If ya goona cry about it dont count the vote, jus wont waste my time in voting in future,
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Shit, this is the dopest battle that ive seen ina while....

Ok...
 
Ikon: Came out blazin...opener was hot punch to start the battle with...personal made it stronger....flow was sick...could have used a couple transistional rhymes to assist however....some dope wordplay...Nep line was fire...the personal about "punk" him not really listenin to rap was killer....
 
"Flippin� ya lands!� It�s almost like I taught you ya lines
�EVEN YOU ADMITTED THAT YOUR STYLE WAS TRACED OFF OF MINE!
Aimin� ya eyes at him� YOU�LL be seein� the fake:
When Nep recruited, even SMOOTH thought you were bein� a snake... (True Story...) "
^murderous shit right there
The only complaint about this drop is closer...it was a hot line if not kinda played imo...i personally woulda had my second to last bar as my closer cuz that killer...any way...sick fuckin drop...
 
Junior: On the real, u been on fire lately...aside from the battle with the novice (forget his name...irrelevent lol) every drop ive seen from u has been consistantly fire...this drop was no different...Basically Una put on a "wordplay clinic" with shit...i aint gonna lie i really cant think of anybody who is better with wordplay than jr...this also is your downfall however...it seems you focused on lots of wordplay (as always ur style which is dope) however with the drop that game had, he had waaay more personals...yours was straight fiiiiire...however not as direct as Ikons...saturn line was siiick...Miami heat line was tight...maybe a bit played seein all the heat lines thats been bein used in battles recently...
 
You've never been fire well Una's bar's are hell
Kon couldn't be 'Inn-credible' as'a "five'star hotel"..  ;)
^sick ass shit
 
Opener and the closer was hot...
 
Overall: Sick ass battle...could prob go either way...but the deciding factor in a really hot ass close battle is.....personals....Ikon simply had the more direct, personal drop...He jus had too many personals that really hit hard..honestly without those personals, Una woulda won...Props to both, i would really like to see rematch...
 
Vote: Ikontinue....-1
 
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Ok i did'nt want to say this but can we have some none Dynasty crew votes... Im not hatin' just i would like a few more vets to peep this or someone thats not involved with either crew...
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WOW! first of all, great verses from the both of you...damn this was a tight battle...
 
Game:  Good shit, Nice verse again...I felt like ya verse was dope...Had some nice punches and shit...good personals...some multi's if I remember correctly...I did feel like the begining was just a bit slow though...Opener was kinda played but decent still...didn't like the gay line either...Just about everything afterwords was dope though...good shit, once again
 
Junior:  My how you've grown up...J/P...Good shit though, Ya verse was hot also...As expected, you came with alot of wordplay and nameplay...Your opener wasn't all that great either...Niether was ya closer...Closer was a bit of a stretch...Other than that, didn't see any other problems...You had alot of mentionables in ya verse...Plenty of hot lines...Once again good shit....
 
Overall:  As expected for a final, ya'll both drop ridiculous bars (both in numbers and creativity)...If the battle wasn't so long I would have voted earlier...I finally decide to though...I felt both participant brought their a game to the battle ("A game" nice little name play...) but I felt...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Junior took this, wordplay was fucking tight, Yea game came with nice punches but juniors wordplay had more of an effect to me...I responded more to it, even chuckled a bit...Props to both and stay up...
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aight, im gonna break this down easier than i normally do...

ikon
Ya moved to Romania just to get with ya hoe, so
This PUSSY is pussy whipped� like a lesbian homo
-ok opener... not too much of a punch tho... the play was cool/ humorous...
A threat �n you�ll no show, yet you swear ya bad �n ya big
The fact of it is� I ONLY TALKED TO YOU FOR AVYS AND SIGS (thanks!)
-lol, good punch here, direct and to the point... nice bar...
Damaged ya wit� punches, ain�t lettin� that shit slide
You won't vote against ya crew? What more proof that ya dick ride?
-ehhh, didn't really feel this, not a bad bar, but not much of a punch IMO...
You bitch. Why? �Cus of the fact I gotchu duckin' ma calls
I�ll just assume ya peN is dry �cus Nep is suckin� ya balls
-clever bar here, but the pen/nep play is irrelevant to this battle... i still felt it tho cuz i found it funny... decent bar i guess...
Ya frontin�, c�mon� All ya claims don�t fill in the gap
Why ya register L.A. if you don�t listen to rap?! (�fuck outta here)
-wasn't feelin' this 1...
This bitch can�t relax: We all know you hide your age
And there�s nooo explanation dogg� Besides you�re gay!
-again, wasn't feelin' this 1 either...
Ya rhymes are plays� and indeed ya lines are played
Dude�s gotta explain EVERYTHING he�s tryna say (�cuz it�s forced�)
-lol, good bar here... nice flow/ multis incorporated in a funny/ good punch... good bar...
Ya types are straight av�rage�There�s no cue to ya junk
Fuck ya music preference, dudes already knew you were Punk* (oooooooweeee)
-nice play, decent punch... good bar...
Threw to the dump� given up a fest to the crows
And ya �cleanin �shit� up?�?� think� You forgettin� ya flow! (iiiit's shitty)
-ehhh, play was cool but that's about it... wasn't feelin' this...
Yes �n ya know� Ya left, and I�ll admit I was mad
But if that�s all you�ve gotten on me then that SHIT IS JUST SAD!
-ehhh, flow was ok... nothing much here...
Flippin� ya lands!� It�s almost like I taught you ya lines
�EVEN YOU ADMITTED THAT YOUR STYLE WAS TRACED OFF OF MINE!
-lol, good punch, way to be more direct, nice personal...
Aimin� ya eyes at him� YOU�LL be seein� the fake:
When Nep recruited, even SMOOTH thought you were bein� a snake... (True Story...)
-haha, good punch here... way to use what i once said and work it into a punch... fucker... lol... nice flow, good personal/ punch...
Ya easy as cake the way all my punches landing on ya, and�
This ain�t the first time we seen "Game drop a Bomber, man"
-play was fuckin' dope here, but it was kinda forced to do so... good bar, nonetheless...
Plus� Ya can�t defend the way I hurt ya�ll dudes
...Bomb ain�t "dropped no serious damage" since in World War Two
-again, good play, creative... decent bar...
It�s Ikon verse who? How is it sooo suspenseful?
Battled �GAINST a NOVICE rank, and got a vote AGAINST you! (Pro?!)
-ehhh, didn't work as well as you hoped here... i see what you wanted to do but i think it mostly missed...
Hence� you ain�t a rival. Tec�s (text) spray like a gun?
I-kontinue to call you "Junior"...Why? Ya still gettin� "sonned"
-DAMN son... great bar here... play/ punch was on point... good shit...
Layed in the dump with text� no resolute to pull�
You're second J wit' "forced plays", and always "shoot for Bull"
-ehh... decent closer at best... just seemed like ya tried to do too much with it... lost the directness... idk, still a decent close...

junior
..Im the diffrence between us, a Master with each phrase
Plus i stay hot 'weather' or not you asked for a heatwave (whether)
-ehh, ok opener, seeing as the play was cool... but it wasn't really a punch...
Let me rephrase.. Fuck Game, i'll get rid of ya crew
'An engrave "Junior" across ya face as my 'signature move'...
-clever bar here... the play was tight, ok punch... good bar...
Summin' smell's bad!, i'll kick your team & there odor
Cus' the 'Game's finished' now like the "Cricket season is over!"..
-again, clever bar... game over/ finished bars are pretty played but you brought some originality to it so it works...
Why'd i join The Dynasty?, sympathy for you!
Ya clique's dope? your sick? both simply are not true
-lol, funny bar here... not the hardest punch but it does land... clowning type punch... good bar...
Your wimpy, so's ya crew, there chump's your'a faggot
I'll eat this 'shrimp' in more ways than "Bubba Gump could imagine"
-DOPE play here... nice play/ punch... good bar...
Ya shit'll get battered, text ripped up an scattered
Kon couldn't 'hang with me in the ring' if we kicked it on Saturn!
-the play was dope here, too... but the punch wasn't quite as effective... decent bar tho...
It wont happen cus' your talent's hardly elite bro
Una's got Game 'dread-in'a loss' like "Bob Marley in kemo"
-OH SHIT... best bar of the battle IMO... clever play worked into a good punch... good shit...
Darn'it your weak flow ain't nice it's missin' G
He could be'a 'virgin birth' an' still not have'a "tight delivery"
-ehhh, was ok at best... play was cool again, but not much of a punch on this 1...
Kon love's my swagger, he'll be feelin' this fist too
It's like Game's 'saving magazine's' he's got "serious issues!"
-aggressive use of play here, seems they work better when incorporate them into punches... good bar...
Straight k-o this gimmick, who's text we don't mention
Cus' when you write im 'pushing bored' like'a legless veteran
-ehhh, wasn't really feelin' this 1... play was, as usual, evident... but not much else here...
Fuck The Dynasty G.. You can't manage'a DOPE team
Plus, Battling J's a 'hell of'a gamble' like'a "satanic slot machine"
-same as the last bar... not direct enough to be a strong punch... the play was nice tho...
Drop your fake personals, it's fact they aint landing
Game ain't sick.. That's why he drafted in hanGing
-ehhh, decent bar... not too much to it, but was at least direct...
Kid your no vet, infact your lame with the text
I'll just open ya throat like'a window your'a "pane" in the neck (Pain)
-good punch here, good bar...
Game'll get wrecked cus' his dissing is lame
Never thought much of you, like i was "missing my brain"
-lol, clever play here, nice punch... good bar...
I'll eat up an' maim him with the neat'est of flames
Kid's think im 'Miami's coach driver'.. I bring "Heat to the Game"
-DAMN... another killer bar here... good shit...
Assassin's are dope, peeps hate it cus im notably sick
Kon the 'writings on the wall' for you like your Dynasty sig (Crew Page)
-good personal/ play, nice punch... good bar...
Shit your weak an' what you speak & preach is past it
Junior's 'out the reach of kid's' like "bleach an' tablets".. [Sup Kon?]
-lol @ the play, good use of his age, too... good bar...
My whole clique is dope, we drop sublime theme's
While your's is "clueless" like 'Rookie Cop's at crime scene's'
-good play here, although not a direct/ strong punch... decent bar...
You've never been fire well Una's bar's are hell
Kon couldn't be 'Inn-credible' as'a "five'star hotel"..  ;)
-the play was tight, punch landed... decent bar...
Junior's praised, he get's props, but Game? his best flop's
Tracks would'nt "make'a kick underground" with'a basement sweatshop
-again, play was nice... punch was ok... good bar...
I'll detach your limbs.. Leave your back in split's
Toss your arm's in the river..... Catch the drift?!
-good, direct punch here... idea was kinda wierd, but it worked out... good bar...
I'll smash your shit, leave you fucked up on crutches
It's fact brah "I pack more name's then you pack punches"
-lol @ this 1... i don't think it worked as well as you wanted junior, but it was a funny punch so you get SOME credit... decent bar...
You can't jack, touch this cus' Game force's an' more
His flow's 'dead on arrival' like "corpses in morgues!"
-play was dope here... good punch... good bar...
I'll make you forfeit of course, Junior's short fuzed
No-one's 'hearing you Kon' except the "court room" (Con)
-ehhh, wasn't feelin' this that much...
I'll thwart you, Game'll get left in blood & bone's
When my stunning flow's "air Kon" like summer home's.. (Con)
-damn, good bar here... ya plays are dope throughout this verse...
So now my bar's are unleashed, we see Game's far from a beast
An' next time you 'open up to me' i'll make you wear ya "heart on ya sleeve!" ;)
-ehh, after such a good verse, this closer was kind of a dissapointment... the play was ok, but the idea wasn't even that great... decent close at best...

just like everyone else, i expected una's verse to be full of wordplay, but i think he worked them well enough IMO to get the job done... he just had more OH SHIT bars to me, and less bars that i thought didn't work... shav, you had a good verse too bro, i just think una came more aggressive in this 1... therefore

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 October 2006 at 3:04pm
Wow, thanks to all the voters so far... It's now tied at 4-4... It's no science next vote win's...
 
& im sure Ikon will agree... No herb vote's please... Someone who is trusted to decide who win's this tourny is only fair...
 
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