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Cee-Jay Outlaw 
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Joined: 11 October 2007 Status: Offline Points: 2131 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-3-0 Form: WLLWWL |
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 Topic: Rank MePosted: 18 October 2007 at 9:03am |
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Hey Guys please Post i wanna elevate a rank, and give me feedback please
i'm only spittin 16 but i can do much more  I'm A Grime Mc, Just too let you knowOkk Cj Here, Lyrical dominater why do u have to go and be a hater you dont wanna mess i'm a lyrical alligator the urge for a clash just keeps getting greater rudeboii u need to make a decision i'm ready with a shank to make a incision i'm never off beat allways in precision face it blud ur not in my division Rudeboii its obvious ur faking have u seen what the bookmakers staking i think ur Lyrics need forsaking or from this nightmare u wont be waking wen u spit next try not to be shaking cos u've got limbs i wouldnt mind breaking the place at the top i will be taking u best get decision making |
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2smooth
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Posted: 18 October 2007 at 10:29am |
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ya' rhymes were VERY basic... but ya' flow was ok... work on bein' more complex... NOV...
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 18 October 2007 at 10:44am |
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wht u mean by complex?
like multi's?? |
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2smooth
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Posted: 18 October 2007 at 10:53am |
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what i mean by basic is this... your rhymes are only the last word...
text text text text BREAKING
text text text text text text FAKING
text text text text HATER
text text text text text ALIGATOR
there's nothin' complex about it... yeah, multi's might help, but so would wordplays an' clever, fresh ideas...
anyways, if you want more advice on this, post it in the open mic section an' ask for feed...
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Fatal
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...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
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Posted: 18 October 2007 at 12:24pm |
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Gotta agree wit Smooth...Your verse is VERY basic...i suggest readin our tutorials...you need to improve in all areas...i also suggest reading battles from some of the better guys here to see what a dope verse looks like... Rank: Novice
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G-Pfeif
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Joined: 19 June 2004 Location: Maryland Status: Offline Points: 2541 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-0 Form: WWWLLW |
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Posted: 18 October 2007 at 2:10pm |
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listen to these guys... read the tut's... read some verses by the pro's of the site...
search for battles from Orion, Ikon, 2 Smooth, Myself, and other pro's and see how our verses have more to them Nov keep workin |
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"I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks" |
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Rameez
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Posted: 24 October 2007 at 3:46pm |
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don't worry man ur better than G-PUP, FAT-ill, N 2 Smoothy
Edited by Rameez - 24 October 2007 at 4:08pm |
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Swift Styles
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Posted: 24 October 2007 at 5:42pm |
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ight RAM ME
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Rameez
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Posted: 24 October 2007 at 7:51pm |
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^ LOL that was HOMO
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Fatal
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Posted: 24 October 2007 at 8:02pm |
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But its YOUR name...congrats
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 24 October 2007 at 9:17pm |
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hoe'd
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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Swift Styles
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Posted: 24 October 2007 at 10:25pm |
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X's 2
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