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    Posted: 24 December 2007 at 2:10pm

I hate haters, they sayin i deserve the sack
But fair play, even i'll admit im really, rarely wack
So call me what u want, i'll keep defeatin ya men though
Coz im LA's biggest feature this xmas, like the wii to nintendo
An when i write a verse, i can get any rapper sent to hell
Because my 'post get's in your way', like to hatton when he fell
An thats due to the fact i post the tightest raps, son!
I'll leave you with more plasters on ya face than fuckin micheal jackson!
Testosterone controllin me, my sacks fatter than santas!
Anger makes me climb up ya family tree an start snappin the branches
Im savage and im just tryna rep the hardest
Watch me put a big price on ya head like an expensive barbers
All the men that watch are standin back astounded,
And THATS why im that kid ya mom won't let u hang around with....
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Testosterone controllin me, my sacks fatter than santas!
Anger makes me climb up ya family tree an start snappin the branches

Clap classic, illest line i read in a while  

All the men that watch are standin back astounded,
And THATS why im that kid ya mom won't let u hang around with....
 
Clap killer closer , point on that ishhhh!


Edited by CHAIN - 24 December 2007 at 5:00pm
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lol, this was nice...nice flow throughout...some koo lines made an enjoyable read...i liked the way the santas/branches couple was delivered...the way i flowed wit da verse, the whole thing sounded aggressive and demandin if ya kno wat i mean...nice shit man...
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote mcwoods Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 December 2007 at 5:17pm
yeah, i know what freeda means, kinda like the unbitten 16 one

branch line was really memorable, good play and well executed

flow tight, nice plays and worded well,

drop more man lol
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Testosterone controllin me, my sacks fatter than santas!
Anger makes me climb up ya family tree an start snappin the branches
^^best line, MADE the verse.. hands down, hope-est line there..
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Haha nice shit point..I have to agree the familly tree bar was dope nice..you also had some decent lines even though I wasnt feelin some plays..keep up
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Fatal Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 December 2007 at 6:26pm
Nice verse P...couple nice lines in there....keep droppin
 
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Testosterone controllin me, my sacks fatter than santas!
Anger makes me climb up ya family tree an start snappin the branches

^Very creative...
this piece flowed nice.. nice multies and a few gud punches and lines.. overall it was a gud piece.. nice.

but man how many times are yu gonna use
" So call me what u want, i'll keep defeatin ya men though
Coz im LA's biggest feature this xmas, like the wii to nintendo"

U used it twice on HHE.. lol..


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An when i write a verse, i can get any rapper sent to hell
Because my 'post get's in your way', like to hatton when he fell

Ha, that was slick. You showed me the snappin the branches line on MSN... Stay up.
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