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CHAIN
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Topic: Rectify ThisPosted: 06 May 2008 at 4:05am |
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g'head and prove me wrong, lol
go in.....
The best alive till better scribes can rectify what Chain said
Was next to die, but exercised the vet survived to break bread With those that don’t oppose and recognize the snake head The rest can die today, so step aside or play dead Speak or go to sleep ‘cause death arrived to make beds I lecture minds with text supplies of pesticide for K-Fed’s Never cried, not petrified of threats inside a hate thread Never mind, I bet them guys would testify for Chain’s cred Terrorize their petty lives till heaven cries a rain red From vaporized blood of sets I fried while aids spreads Of course u know the name so fear my stuff or join the bums ‘All in’ with the poker face, here to flush the royal ones The warning, a warning, to liars throwing chairs at me The warring, I’m for it, ‘cause lying won’t embarrass me That I won’t encourage, y’all tryna clone a parody Tryna fool a lion like them biased votes are rarities I’m laughing at the wining, guys who post hilarities Fake thugs acting like, my fire’s momentarily My fire is democracy to tyrants soaked in kerosene The Big Daddy Kane of this, u Spider Loc compared to me Venomous Edited by CHAIN - 06 May 2008 at 5:42pm |
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Rameez
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Posted: 06 May 2008 at 7:13pm |
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this was dope spit.. alot of personal thing I'm feeling from this.. its like you aiming at some shitty ppl on LA.. probably dynasty..JOKING.. nice multi, the flow was smooth.. kept me reading.. plenty of good line.. I can't pick the best 1 cuz the whole spit is dope.. keep spiting those flames.. 1
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Madeye
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Posted: 06 May 2008 at 10:31pm |
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Flow was lava, Chain... Dope drop.
We share that "line-to-line with similar annunciation" type of rhyme scheme... liked it.
Some lines are multied from start to finish, and carried over to the next line - giving you that Multied-Bars skill... Nice Ish.
Vocabs ill, conceptual aspects are hot. I like this style alot, and was a wicked read.
Stay Up, mayng.
One ['1] Edited by Madeye - 06 May 2008 at 10:32pm |
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CHAIN
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Posted: 07 May 2008 at 4:03pm |
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rameez -appreciate the feedback...and i'm not getting @ anybody but if u feel like i'm talking 'bout the dynasty..it is what it is, lol
mad-eye- good looking out on the feed
ps: 3 replies - 50 views......y'all need to stop frontin Edited by CHAIN - 07 May 2008 at 4:04pm |
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Fatal
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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 12:09am |
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Lol...im sure some of them digs were at me. But nonetheless was a hot verse. Although a callout would have proven more :P jk...good shit
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CHAIN
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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 3:25am |
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lol, nah, fatal....those digs weren't for you, you don't fit the description
..don't worry, lol
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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 3:41am |
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i didnt get it
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CHAIN
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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 4:42am |
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didn't get what?
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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 4:53pm |
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Damn. I like your rap style. thats the way i flow, lots of multies. The thing that made this one so hot is that i had the g's up instrumental playing when i read it, and it just flowed crazy, you got alot of skills.
you fell off a little after the "That I won’t encourage, y’all tryna clone a parody" line but the drop was still hot. Edited by Rhymez - 08 May 2008 at 4:56pm |
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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 6:04pm |
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props chain, i's drop feed but you aint need it on this one, bang up verse. again, props.
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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 8:26pm |
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i didn't get most of it...flow was nice but meaning was lacking imo...
Was others also but im tired... |
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