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Calibra 
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 Topic: Remember Me?Posted: 12 January 2010 at 12:45am |
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Remember me? Yeah, thought so... Watch me... break down the monotany
Solemnly swear, too profound for philosphy My prophecies, are the sound of monopoly Bound to astound till the ground is on top of me Im outta my cage, im like Tyson to box We can't scuffle cause im too busy fightin' the odds Lyrically? Einstein, they place my mind at the top Been quiet lately but I've been typin' a lot Right out the blocks, so catch me if you can The gingerbread man ain't the athlete that I am Pissed and im smackin' a bitch in the mammary gland Shit, I flipped and now im fuckin' up ya family plans Glady I hand, you ya ass and serve with h'orderves Unique, no other C's in a universe with 4 Earths Sick of basic gay shit, to drop you need to 'Pause' first Im the saviour, I'll amaze ya like the child that the Lord birthed You got that form curse, all ya puttin' out's a forced verse Bored after the first, ya value's droppin' like it's Saws worth My lyrics so hard when you mime it makes ya jaws hurt I rock Hip Hop, im what made Collision Course work! Edited by Calibra - 12 January 2010 at 10:08am |
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Posted: 12 January 2010 at 12:54am |
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u speld monotony rong + dere wuz no ppunches multiz basic w/e
It was good...effortless. Didn't seem to follow a particular inspiration or strong theme but it still demonstrated an ability surpassing most with some good lines |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Calibra
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Posted: 12 January 2010 at 10:09am |
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Cheers O, changed the spelling lolcould have sworn I checked that.
Props for the feed. |
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Posted: 12 January 2010 at 1:43pm |
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nice read cali i liked tha gingerbread man line an tha "amaze" Gods son line was Sick keep droppin this was average for you but still came good nice read an stay up
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
It aint over till I Rapdisup |
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Posted: 12 January 2010 at 1:52pm |
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Right out the blocks, so catch me if you can
The gingerbread man ain't the athlete that I am that line was So Stand out-ish to me....No Homo, but it kinda just rolls off tha Tounge
nice shyt Cali
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Posted: 12 January 2010 at 2:29pm |
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Nice shit cal as usual, as everyone said gingerbread line was sick...flow well throughout and as O said surpassed most people on here in majority of catefgorys....shit was ill
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Posted: 13 January 2010 at 5:39pm |
i know u'r gonna be mad at my feed....but whatever, lol
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Posted: 13 January 2010 at 6:23pm |
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The idea of the closer was sick. Flow is so smooth, so... audio. Haha. Good verse.
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Posted: 06 February 2010 at 3:35pm |
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Echo the thoughts of everyone else really, no real topic to the verse but still some impressive stuff in there...I liked the gingerbread man line, that was nice.
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Posted: 06 February 2010 at 8:03pm |
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Born to astound till the ground is on top of me. Love the flow, the gingerbread man line, the rhymes were good, etc. There's an echo in here.
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Insert something rappy here
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