Open Mic: Off My Chest

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   fuck my Pops thats smokes Rock, and my moms that Smokes Bomb(bud)
and my brother that gave all his money to his Baby Moms
and my Cuzzin tried to help, but really his Design
was for me to get off on trackz, and Sky Rocket through his Prime
its like a Rocket in my Mind, i tried to quit Rappin but to Stop it is a Crime
so i Pop in every Line, i'll stick a Fork ina Socket to Shock in every Rhyme
i feel like im Killin alotta people but noone even Listens Tho
JR Assassyn, i mean, is Obviously invissible.........
even with them dotted lines above nobody Seen Me
nobody checks my Threads, nobody Gives me FreeBee's
gotta reply to Every Thread, cuz nobody comes with Feed Free
and Sage didnt Havta Drop a Audio, he coulda Teased me, and Key'd Me
then everybody says Lyricists Inc is tha Wackest Crew
why? cuz we more Active than You, or Actually Rap what we Do?
i mean, Noobs get mad when yall callin em Noobs
and tha, Mods get mad when yall callin em Fools
and tha, Vets just Laugh cuz most have been in their Shoes
and i bet, Scotty gets Mad when yall give em tha News
i dont even fuck wit Cuba or Cali, but i Hit em ona Private Message
fuck it, lets just say they gave me a Lil Private Lesson
showed me how to drop Links in my Verses cuz most of em come wit Questions
and even tho they dont have tha same amount of Stars, i see em as Solid Veterans
i never said i was tha most Lyrical nor will i ever Try to Be
cuz when i stop sayin what i feel just to throw Multies thats when i would Lie to ME!!!
but yall gone start seenin Alotta me, like that bold guy with tha Mustache on Monopoly
and its coo if yall dont reply to this, cuz it'b be just Another Robbery...sumthin that we all are used to by now............
and yall might say that this dosent flow on Text
but it dosent matter just sumthin that had to get OFF MY CHEST

yea man...i just felt like writin...i got more to get off my chest tho

Sass

Edited by J Sass - 16 February 2010 at 12:21pm

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J Sass Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 24 June 2009 Location: Omaha,Ne Status: Offline Points: 1918 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 12-7-3 Form: WWWNNN	Post Options Post Reply Quote J Sass Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Off My Chest Posted: 16 February 2010 at 12:19pm
	fuck my Pops thats smokes Rock, and my moms that Smokes Bomb(bud) and my brother that gave all his money to his Baby Moms and my Cuzzin tried to help, but really his Design was for me to get off on trackz, and Sky Rocket through his Prime its like a Rocket in my Mind, i tried to quit Rappin but to Stop it is a Crime so i Pop in every Line, i'll stick a Fork ina Socket to Shock in every Rhyme i feel like im Killin alotta people but noone even Listens Tho JR Assassyn, i mean, is Obviously invissible......... even with them dotted lines above nobody Seen Me nobody checks my Threads, nobody Gives me FreeBee's gotta reply to Every Thread, cuz nobody comes with Feed Free and Sage didnt Havta Drop a Audio, he coulda Teased me, and Key'd Me then everybody says Lyricists Inc is tha Wackest Crew why? cuz we more Active than You, or Actually Rap what we Do? i mean, Noobs get mad when yall callin em Noobs and tha, Mods get mad when yall callin em Fools and tha, Vets just Laugh cuz most have been in their Shoes and i bet, Scotty gets Mad when yall give em tha News i dont even fuck wit Cuba or Cali, but i Hit em ona Private Message fuck it, lets just say they gave me a Lil Private Lesson showed me how to drop Links in my Verses cuz most of em come wit Questions and even tho they dont have tha same amount of Stars, i see em as Solid Veterans i never said i was tha most Lyrical nor will i ever Try to Be cuz when i stop sayin what i feel just to throw Multies thats when i would Lie to ME!!! but yall gone start seenin Alotta me, like that bold guy with tha Mustache on Monopoly and its coo if yall dont reply to this, cuz it'b be just Another Robbery...sumthin that we all are used to by now............ and yall might say that this dosent flow on Text but it dosent matter just sumthin that had to get OFF MY CHEST yea man...i just felt like writin...i got more to get off my chest tho Sass Edited by J Sass - 16 February 2010 at 12:21pm


Alcatraz Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 20 December 2009 Location: Maryland Status: Offline Points: 231 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-2-1 Form: LWWLWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote Alcatraz Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 16 February 2010 at 3:24pm
	nice drop regardless i mean, Noobs get mad when yall callin em Noobs and tha, Mods get mad when yall callin em Fools and tha, Vets just Laugh cuz most have been in their Shoes and i bet, Scotty gets Mad when yall give em tha News loled at this i never said i was tha most Lyrical nor will i ever Try to Be cuz when i stop sayin what i feel just to throw Multies thats when i would Lie to ME!!! but yall gone start seenin Alotta me, like that bold guy with tha Mustache on Monopoly nice

King Jehu Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote King Jehu Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 16 February 2010 at 7:38pm
	Very honest, very true and very well said. The message is more important than the rhymes and the flow. The rhymes were fine, the lines were way long on some parts, but nothing had awkward phrasing or overt errors (aside from bold rather than bald). Good job J.
	Insert something rappy here

J Sass Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 24 June 2009 Location: Omaha,Ne Status: Offline Points: 1918 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 12-7-3 Form: WWWNNN	Post Options Post Reply Quote J Sass Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 16 February 2010 at 8:14pm
	good lookin for tha feed yall .....i think sum lines are Stretched too(sumthin i dont do Often) and i didnt catch that Typo KJ, but good lookin out.. Sass


Sick-Witted Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran Joined: 07 September 2008 Location: The USA Status: Offline Points: 601 Text Rank: #11 Stats: 2-1-0 Form: WWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Sick-Witted Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 16 February 2010 at 11:00pm
	you definitely got something off your chest via this drop man...peace
	Sick-Witted->means I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it

$n00z Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 06 February 2010 Location: NC Status: Offline Points: 1267 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-7-0 Form: WWLWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote $n00z Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 16 February 2010 at 11:46pm
	i like this sass. these are my fav songs right here. that real life stuff. I gotta couple myself. but these are the type lyrics that you b like "fuck if anyone else feels it" because they will have to b/c u feel it cause it comes from ya heart. I personally liked the whole thing. you want the lyrics to keep you interested all the way thru and that's what these did
	U already know...

Calibra Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote Calibra Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 February 2010 at 7:05pm
	Very good stuff Sass, really impressed with the progression. Much like my Russian Roulette pt. 2 open I think you had something you really wanted to say and rather than sacrifice content for flow you sacrificed flow for content, which in my opinion is always the way to go. Wasn't sure how to take the name drop at first but I know you ain't mean anything bad sayin' you don't fucks with me so that's cool. "cuz when i stop sayin what i feel just to throw Multies thats when i would Lie to ME!!!" Easily my favourite line. Keep it up dude.

J Sass Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 24 June 2009 Location: Omaha,Ne Status: Offline Points: 1918 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 12-7-3 Form: WWWNNN	Post Options Post Reply Quote J Sass Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 22 February 2010 at 6:44am
	good lookin for tha feed yall....and Cali, when i said that it was more on sum i dont fuck wit yall to tha Extent to where we on sum MSN type shyt or Collabin....but i still hit yall up and yall didnt Bullshyt me....cuz yall really couldve....but yall didnt and it just showed how real yall were....Senor too...i just forgot to mention him.... but good lookin for tha Feed yall Sass


Kiki Spirez Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4375 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kiki Spirez Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 23 February 2010 at 3:42am
	I like pieces that feel like rants, you know that someones felt better through writing it, and it's nice to see rhymin' help someone. Some true shit here. and my Cuzzin tried to help, but really his Design was for me to get off on trackz, and Sky Rocket through his Prime Highlight for me, liked the wordin'..


CHAIN Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote CHAIN Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 25 February 2010 at 10:23pm
	then everybody says Lyricists Inc is tha Wackest Crew why? cuz we more Active than You, or Actually Rap what we Do? that's what's up, u need to do a part 2 to this one
	+Sick-Witted+

Lucky D Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 17 November 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1528 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 17-21-0 Form: WWLLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Lucky D Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 February 2010 at 8:46pm
	Well done Sass...this was one of your better pieces. then everybody says Lyricists Inc is tha Wackest Crew why? cuz we more Active than You, or Actually Rap what we Do? Truth!!!!


Stalin Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2599 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Stalin Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 28 February 2010 at 12:23am
	Some real shit there.. dont remember seein this, had some real solid lines in there. You need to vent more often so you drop more.

I-kontinue Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote I-kontinue Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 01 March 2010 at 2:00am
	It was an interestin' read the whole way through cause I wanted to see what the next problem would be in the next line... So you did ya job... Good way of venting, good rhyming. Some of the line lengths lookded extended, but it flowed to me, and alot of the shit in it was true... Overall, a good address to how you feel. Keep shit real. Ha.