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J504 
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 Topic: 24Posted: 20 December 2010 at 9:05pm |
 I put the 2 to the 4 like I'm takin' six
Makin'lines get the sizzle like some bacon strips Take the bitch from ya verse then I tape her wrists And rape her quick like 24 from the Laker's did It's not my fault, I didn't make her shake her tits Oh Shit, cops! Quick,somebody flip the breaker switch! This ain't my Greatest Hits, it's just my latest spit The Kobe line was a stretch, but I made it fit I keep my bars Gucci while yours are fake as shit You can't touch my double dozen with a baker's mitt I make haters quit and expose those fakest friends I'm not gonna pretend I'm Jem and make amends My 24 gets spent with me makin ends stacking end to end as I rake it in and make that kid shut up, cause if he irks me I choke the fucker out with a Griffey jersey I attack wack cowards and I slap Jack Bauer with 24 lines and I ain't turning back hours Doin' line after line like I'm snortin' text I own the track, watch me make Jeff Gordon wreck I go twenty fo, but I can go many mo' I hate skinny jeans when they on a skinny hoe Plotting evil on me? you better seek a redeemer Peep game in Proverbs, you're whats known as a schemer |
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 20 December 2010 at 9:39pm |
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Don't know how you came up with this.. But this is how it went for me..
Rape Line-  Turning back hours Line-  Good variety in a pretty limited and minimalistic topic, but you did it so well, you always drop creatively man, keep it up. |
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Stalin
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Posted: 20 December 2010 at 10:59pm |
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This shit flowed good.. Some nice lines in there too... Keep comin wit this kinda shit. I was impressed.
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Posted: 20 December 2010 at 11:43pm |
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Nice, couple of funny ones in there...bit simple in parts, but was coolio
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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 12:04am |
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Damn J5 you drop too many open mics for me to keep up, lol. This was fire, like roofs in the ghetto. Haha keep bringin it man!! The stretched line was coo!! |
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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 12:15pm |
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this woz a hot drop j. Loved the way u switched between 24 n kobe. The double dozen line woz madness lol. Your scheme woz on point and the multis were used very well. All in all, this woz a decent peice j n you just keep killin it with all these different styles. Bravo kiddo!
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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 3:13am |
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Shit was sick! I was peeping this some days ago.From the opener to the transition ...it was perfect! You already know J......its all good!
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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 3:19am |
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I wuv the Kobe refernce
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 12:19am |
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Good concept, could have done even more with it but thinking outside the box again which is key...inspiring
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 5:36am |
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...enjoyment throughout. Theme's nailed more than adequately.
I liked this read. Well put together.
Let up a smidge near the end, no compromise to flow, though.
Good shit.
One [1] Edited by Madeye - 02 January 2011 at 5:37am |
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<font color=darkgray>I'm only offended by those I respect... and I don't respect you[/COLOR]
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J504
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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 3:08pm |
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'preciate the feed on this.
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