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Manc 
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 Topic: Manc Vs TwizPosted: 13 April 2011 at 10:25pm |
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Any explained votes count 3 straight votes KO - first to 5 otherwise Flipping/feeding allowed Due no longer than a week from today Drop first & I'll follow shortly afterwards Good luck |
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twiz
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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 4:42pm |
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checkin' in!
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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 4:31pm |
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twiz
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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 4:49pm |
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Right .....first battle and all..... Opening
Interestingly enough "MANC TO THE UNION" rearranged is " a innocent mouth"
......time to spit some childish shit on this kid .....take him back to school...
Cease~and~desist, this bitch is the reason that treason~exists,
Your like a thalidomide baby, "no arms", thats the reason~he's~pissed, Twiz'll finish with this "pussy" quick, like teenage premature ejaculation, No exaggeration, Ill smash this patient, lyrically bash his fucking face in, This dude couldnt "cum" slick with his whole dick covered in lube, I heard the best thing "coming out" of Manny was the M602! I run "circles" around this kid just to prove that you got no "girth", Your whole style is "ass Backwards" like you were a "breech birth", This "scally" must be blazed~up, too much praise got you raised~up, I thought Man City and Man United was your two favourite gay~clubs! You can't diminish my winning pattern, I demolish and flatten, Your "punches" are way stretched like that fat midget Ricky Hatton, The more I hear this wack "Lyricist stink", the faster I get irate, You wanna rap like "Shameless", but you sound more like "Chatsworth Estate", Ya forgettable rhymes come up "short" cos I tripped~over~this~nipper, If I wanted to "hear your lip" I would have flipped~open ~my~zipper. Ricky Hatton is a boxer from Manchester
M602 is the main road out of Manchester (apparently
Shameless is an East London rapper, Chatsworth Estate is a kind of "chav" estate in the TV show Shameless.
"Scally" is a term for a Northern chav.
dont think I need to explain much more...
Waiting for Manc to reply....!
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Lucky D
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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 6:31pm |
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Twinz your biting or recyclin...
Ya forgettable rhymes come up "short" cos I tripped~over~this~nipper, If I wanted to "hear your lip" I would have flipped~open ~my~zipper.... Good Bye
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Lucky D
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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 6:33pm |
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Theres more than just that one line also...but that one stuck out to me...nipper....didn't seem right
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J504
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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 7:17pm |
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damn.... Not another one.
Props on spotting that one, Lucky!
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Manc
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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 7:28pm |
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Oh heck SMH
I must hold the record for having the most amount of kids who bite lyrics to put against me LOL Terrible way to go out that is |
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Manc
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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 7:42pm |
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Can a mod sort this out please cuz I can't get onto my battle with KidKane until this is dealt with - I'm at my limit ya see
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 8:26pm |
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Moved to BUR.
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 I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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twiz
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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:31am |
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Thats my lyric......I didnt realise I couldnt use lyrics Ive used before.....
I do NOT bite lyrics. If you want I can take out the lyric and rewrite the verse without the line i used before.
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Lucky D
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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:39am |
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I ain't a mod...but in tha rules is says NO BITING/RECYCLING...and besides looking at that verse from tha other site...it seems suspicious as well.
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Lucky D
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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:40am |
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Fixed Rules Fixed Rules are rules that you cannot change as the site does not allow this in battles. You are not required to post this in a battle as they're not allowed even if the battle says they are. The Fixed Rules are as follows:
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Lucky D
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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:42am |
There was more than one also I think I counted at least 4 lines maybe more
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twiz
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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:49am |
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I didnt read the rules .....sorry!
I can assure you all lines are mine, written by me....
Why were they suspicious?
I sometimes forget which lines I have used before.....i have loads shooting around in my brain...
I can rewrite the verse....minus the lines i have used
which lines have i used before?
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Lucky D
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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:54am |
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LA verse Your like a thalidomide baby, "no arms", thats the reason~he's~pissed, Twiz'll finish with this "pussy" quick, like teenage premature ejaculation, No exaggeration, Ill smash this patient, lyrically bash his fucking face in, This dude couldnt "cum" slick with his whole dick covered in lube, I heard the best thing "coming out" of Manny was the M602! I run "circles" around this kid just to prove that you got no "girth", Your whole style is "ass Backwards" like you were a "breech birth", This "scally" must be blazed~up, too much praise got you raised~up, I thought Man City and Man United was your two favourite gay~clubs! You can't diminish my winning pattern, I demolish and flatten, Your "punches" are way stretched like that fat midget Ricky Hatton, The more I hear this wack "Lyricist stink", the faster I get irate, You wanna rap like "Shameless", but you sound more like "Chatsworth Estate", Ya forgettable rhymes come up "short" cos I tripped~over~this~nipper, If I wanted to "hear your lip" I would have flipped~open ~my~zipper. All others that you've biten from....bolded are bitten lines.. Your only Young....Terror so this time I'll accept your schoolboy error, Step to me and you'll "urn" a death "in MY hands" like I'm "Paul Bearer", Nearly all of ya wins are no shows, I Pro flow this wack noob, This dude couldn't "cum" slick with a dick covered in K - Y lube, "Terror" is looking forlorn, aaaah he aint even got a crew to be sworn in, My flows "smokin'", thats why my battles carry a "surgeon generals warning", "Rain" of Terror, hah, my Hurricane of Destruction will show u bad weather-exists, Your 19 years old, kid, u need to have "arms" to be a REAL "terror-wrist" Ya forgettable rhymes come up "short" cos I tripped~over~this~nipper, If I wanted to "hear your lip" I would have flipped~open ~my~zipper Is it me or does your avatar look liked a ****ed up Mario brother, This dumbass is the reason his mom should have carried a rubber, I made him "an offer he couldnt refuse" so now he sleeps with the "fishes", "Codfather", I rip this bitch a new one, vicious, like a chick with big titties, Fake ass gangsta, true, he couldnt even hang with his local crew He says the Blunt is Lit, yet he has no clue how to smoke a fool, It feels like Im trying to climb up the side of a mountain in a sled, So much shit to write down, profound, that my pencils out of lead, Ya'll bitches are trying to "dig" up dirt on me but all you get is "dusty", There must~be liquid in ya rhymes because yours are straight "rusty", I run "circles" around this kid just to prove that you got no "girth" Your whole style is "ass Backwards" like you were a "breech birth" My clique are wise, Its quick~to~see this victory was prophecised I rip "skin" from "bone" like I got The Codfather circumsized, Breaking ya wrist, cock the gat back ready to squeeze hammers send unwanted hits to ya "mail address" and i aint talkin' "spammers You aint got no loyal endz, the streets will deny you proper turf Ya style is "ugly", like ya avy, you look like the Hispanic Papa Smurf! This'll get that hair on ya neck bristled, standing up sharp like a thistle, My Delivery whistles like Scud missiles, ripping "skin from bone" leaving "Grizzle", I run "circles" around this kid just to prove that you got no "girth" Your whole style is "ass Backwards" like you were a "breech birth" Your "worry free days" are over, got ya nervous on the outcome of this, I Use my mic lead as a catheter because this emcee is "taking the piss" Breaking ya wrist, cock the gat back ready to squeeze hammers send unwanted hits to ya "mail address" and i aint talkin' "spammers" I get more "props" than Rugby Union, you get more "flops" than Mariah, This rap battle will never be over, Twiz does not do cease fires. You aint got no loyal endz, the streets will deny you proper turf Ya style is "ugly", like ya avy, you look like the black Papa Smurf! ----Shall I find more..or do you always recycle lines in your battles? |
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Lucky D
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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:56am |
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Thats 5 lines in your verse...that I can find in like 5 minutes. I'm sure if I look harder I might find more.
But 5 lines outta 16...thats over a quarter of your verse..
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twiz
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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 1:01am |
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The lines cant be bitten if they are written by me....
I may have used the lines before but some of them battles are like 5-6 years old....how the hell am i gonna remember every line that i have written?
Do you?
I have said what i needed to say which is I will remove the lines that you have found to be recycled and I will rewrite the verse minus the lines above.
Can you move this back with the lines taken out please?
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twiz
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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 1:04am |
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Go ahead......try and find more! you wont....
Your like a dog with a bone aint ya!
I wrote that shit years ago....you cant tell me that no one on here hasnt at some point dropped a lyric that they may have used at some other time and place. I have aplolgised and offered to rectify it. Get off my back!
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Lucky D
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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 1:09am |
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Alright than whats tha name of tha user at http://www.nextgenupdate.com/forums/1574418-post33.html ... if its you than you should know
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