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Yo, some might say this change of pace is makin me soft
but I'm still runnin' with the devil like I'm David Lee Roth
Still pissin 'em off and not afraid to snap on the boss
cause if I get fired, I'll get ahead by blasting his off
Employee of the month? Fuck you tho, I know I got the right stuff!
I got them Ed Norton tactics gettin paid like in Fight Club 
I AM JACK'S SHADY BUSINESS TACTICS cause this whole jobs a racket
Shits ass backwards like an elderly lady just robbed a black kid
But I can hack it, work 30 years to get a watch or a jacket
That shit'll match attractive to tha diapers and my severance packet
Gotta laugh at that shit, right? I mean who's says life shouldn't be funny?
Trying to juggle it's complexities, hmmm, let's see..."pussy or money?"
I need equal amounts or I bounce, it's just a question of balance
cause there's more employers out there requestin' my talents!
I'm a hot property, so when opportunity drops by to pay me a vist-
I sit up in my recliner and yell "WHO THA FUCK IS IT?" 

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J504 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Banned Joined: 08 June 2010 Status: Offline Points: 5385 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-0-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote J504 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: - Career Advancement Options - Posted: 22 November 2011 at 3:56pm
	Yo, some might say this change of pace is makin me soft but I'm still runnin' with the devil like I'm David Lee Roth Still pissin 'em off and not afraid to snap on the boss cause if I get fired, I'll get ahead by blasting his off Employee of the month? Fuck you tho, I know I got the right stuff! I got them Ed Norton tactics gettin paid like in Fight Club I AM JACK'S SHADY BUSINESS TACTICS cause this whole jobs a racket Shits ass backwards like an elderly lady just robbed a black kid But I can hack it, work 30 years to get a watch or a jacket That shit'll match attractive to tha diapers and my severance packet Gotta laugh at that shit, right? I mean who's says life shouldn't be funny? Trying to juggle it's complexities, hmmm, let's see..."pussy or money?" I need equal amounts or I bounce, it's just a question of balance cause there's more employers out there requestin' my talents! I'm a hot property, so when opportunity drops by to pay me a vist- I sit up in my recliner and yell "WHO THA FUCK IS IT?"

Manc Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 02 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 7032 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 82-4-2 Form: WWWWNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Manc Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 22 November 2011 at 4:19pm
	hahaha at the opener. That was nice Great play in the next bar. Get ahead/ blasting his off (obtain a head by blasting his head off) It came across simple but impressive and effortless - like, how do you fuck with them plays? lol The lady roobbin a black kid line made me laugh haha - again, clever stuff. The closer and previous bar to that were clever too. Great way to work up to the ending. Good stuff kiddo

J Sass Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 24 June 2009 Location: Omaha,Ne Status: Offline Points: 1918 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 12-7-3 Form: WWWNNN	Post Options Post Reply Quote J Sass Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 22 November 2011 at 8:00pm
	i loved this whole thing...tha flow was hot...i was rappin it in my head Yo, some might say this change of pace is makin me soft but I'm still runnin' with the devil like I'm David Lee Roth Still pissin 'em off and not afraid to snap on the boss cause if I get fired, I'll get ahead by blasting his off whole thing was nice...but that opening was crazy Sass


J504 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Banned Joined: 08 June 2010 Status: Offline Points: 5385 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-0-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote J504 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 29 November 2011 at 4:40am
	Much respect on the feed, Sass & Manc - good looking out, fam.