Open Mic: Monster

I cleaned up and rode out to a whole crowd of fanatics..
..steal buffed of mold, grout, and chromed out in acids..   
Bolts found and fastened..
a cracked axle reinforced..
..for a dirt track massive as a back mountain ski resort.
..pyrotechnics fizzled out and cracked against the back stands.
Fire exit signals through the black assist the trapped fans.
..i'm revved off the draw of an exhaust valve and locked foot.   
And crept aloft the pause as the fog fell like log wood.    
I'm a Monster of a truck.. solid black with sequenced stripes..
And a spot of luck from off the polish rag the previous night.   
The lighting was classically set - low and stadium style..
Through the silence scattered steps roamed the stone atrium tiles.   

I fought my pistons as they shot shy from the spark sphere..
The shock system sat in all confines of  the park gear.
Driver done and turnt me up and listened to my engine whine. 
Visor scuffed and pursed shut and shifted for a second time..
Geared in and punched it just to see me stand straight up.. 
I veered for a young chick with a kiwi champaign cup.
Retracted my breaks as the driver turned tighter..
And balanced sideways on the curbs of my tires.
Saw the stricken horror as it glistened off her dream-scape
And boxed through torture as he lifted up the e-brake.
Skidded to a halt amidst the fears of the wide eyed.
And the bigot proved to fall to the interior nice guy. 

This was dope as fuck man, the multies were ridiculous and the flow was smooth as fuck. This type of verse would be much better to record as an audio than the verses where you structure them with really short lines and have to rush spitting them. I much prefer this style. Keep it up man

what up smooth? good shit man, i liked it. still writing that interesting crazy multiple rhyme shit aye? good stuff!

I still don't know how you do everything so smoothly lmao...I may have to avoid your verses to feel better about my rhymes and lines...What really makes this drop great is the golden concept...I mean, the title/concept was such an interesting one and you really stayed on point to describe it and lead us through it...Well done.