Open Mic: A Hard Day's Work

On my shift i walk the corridors, each room i view accordingly
I walk wide leg, and yank on my belt to reassure my authority
Uniform orderly, badge blinging trouser crease could split hairs
Radio in to the boss *10-4 my way everything looks clear*
Its been a good year, no action but iim waitn for a chance to shine
I got a flashlight a hundred watts that could fry ants alive
Minimum wage to keep criminals away so dont double cross me
But i make up with incentives im paid in donuts and coffee
Did my hourly round after fighting with a flooded commode
They need to fix it; cuz when my stomachs got the bubbles i GO
Whistling tunes as i walk; spinning my keys on my index
"Hmmm something smells fishy and not my unwashed brim sweat"
I spin left; see a guy with a badge and a hood walking fast as he culd
"Hey! Where are you coming from!" he made a dash on foot
"Perp! Perp!" I scream while trying to keep up with this thug
Hyperventilating, feels like sumones got a knife stuck in my lung
Saw a bottle of pills spilled all over the floor; i had only one thought
Hes stealing prescription pills; this guys prolly stolen alot
I burst through the front door; and catch one last glimpse of the theif
*perp got away perp got away!* well; shit the cops'll get him at least
I gotta sit down a second; my body aches from tryna run
my mind is numb *watch beeps* oh just in time for lunch!

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the pic is hilarious...fuck yeah Zin...I dont know about the other people who responded to this but this was sick...I love how there is a REAL up and coming topical head on the site...for real it makes me happy to see its not a lost art in the mix between a bunch of name flips and noob battles...

I loved how you opened it up with the opening bars..  flow was smooth and set it up nicely. 

Its been a good year, no action but iim waitn for a chance to shine
I got a flashlight a hundred watts that could fry ants alive---see thats what its about rite there...you getting this topical thing way too quickly haha..good for you Zin

"Whistling tunes as i walk; spinning my keys on my index"--this line alone shows you have a real skill for topical....good for you

"Hmmm something smells fishy and not my unwashed brim sweat"
I spin left; see a guy with a badge and a hood walking fast as he culd
"Hey! Where are you coming from!" he made a dash on foot
"Perp! Perp!" I scream while trying to keep up with this thug
Hyperventilating, feels like sumones got a knife stuck in my lung
Saw a bottle of pills spilled all over the floor; i had only one thought
Hes stealing prescription pills; this guys prolly stolen alot---this whole part rite here could of been worded better..for real...you are nailing the imagery and the concept but work on the execution in this section...you have the rite ideas Zin

I gotta sit down a second; my body aches from tryna run
my mind is numb *watch beeps* oh just in time for lunch!---haha you picked it up here in the end again...you killed it Zin...your the next up and coming topical writer...good for you

EXO hit this.... Zin you got topical skills... hope everyone keeps and eye open for more of your drops cause i feel like you are an underrated writer!!!

lol lol, before i went into the verse i fucking lol'd at that pic, that's a dope one.

now the verse is super dope man and fucking hilarious too, this was a good read, the flow was spot on, i could just imagine the scenery as i read on.... keep it high zin

lol, fucking good man. flow was good, and nice multis!