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Rameez 
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 Topic: I need to do practice but I need some1 to watch itPosted: 08 August 2007 at 10:50pm |
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I delete my rap.. I'll put once I hv good flow
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Posted: 09 August 2007 at 6:01am |
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LMMFAO!!!
Rhymer.com
Man, You'll Get Nowhere Usin Sites Like That.. Jeez.... This Was Terrible, Read The Tutorial Orion Made |
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Posted: 09 August 2007 at 11:44am |
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Ok I'll use rhyme scheme that I look up in the guide...
I always fight the best to make my lyrics to test/ if I lose in text battle, its probably My pc got "fatal errors"/ |
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Posted: 10 August 2007 at 1:03pm |
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I resemble the tooth fairy by the way i am taking your crown!!
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Rameez
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Posted: 28 August 2007 at 7:43pm |
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My Rap making �L.A� Knockdown, beatin
there flow of �Circus clown� |
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Posted: 28 August 2007 at 9:52pm |
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no man, ya second line doesnt even rhyme to the first....
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Posted: 28 August 2007 at 11:44pm |
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I thought Knockdown rhyme with circus clown
and pathetic with hattrick So I still have to rhyme with first line? Is this ok Esl my ass, I�ll still rip ur fur like chicken and make into �McChicken� I bet my dogs won�t eat that, cuz its like no meat or fat, its only a skeleton Edited by Rameez - 28 August 2007 at 11:48pm |
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 12:53am |
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Wtf...skeleton doesnt rhyme with mcchicken....heres an example: This Nov Is Pathetic, His Rhymes Are So Wack
He Struggles Wit Flow, Reminds Me Of Mack...(mackie lol) Ok See how Mack and Wack rhyme? Now look how i match up syllables to assist the flow: "His Rhymes Are So Wack" and "Reminds Me Of Mack?"...Count up the syllables...theres 5 in each....i know that was a real basic bar but it was jus an example...also a nice jab at mackie...cuz he has shitty flow too...blaap blaap... |
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 12:57am |
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dont worry you'll get the hang of it man.. Fatal knows what he's doin..
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 8:57am |
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ok
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 8:57am |
ON THE FLOOOR IS FUCKING STICHES !!!!!! HAHAHAH
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Dominance beyond your grasp
That life you talk, I walk the path/ I rip lames, give cause for casts I spit flames, like rocket packs |
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 8:57am |
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i can imagine at home ..wtf u mean mcchicken doesnt rhyme with skeleton
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Dominance beyond your grasp
That life you talk, I walk the path/ I rip lames, give cause for casts I spit flames, like rocket packs |
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 11:18am |
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I think mcChicken/Skeleton are
Assonant rhyme or
Consonant rhyme
Now I'm confused  Edited by Rameez - 29 August 2007 at 11:21am |
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 11:45am |
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they dont rhyme end of dont use it :-)...
just use the basic example fatal given you ..just put in world if u wanna try wordplay talk 2 woods he'll give u a spare a-4sheet of paper full of them ( lol ) so so basic ......im reading you asif you wear a book... your daughters virginity isnt only thing i took... book took rhymes obv...u just gota mix it up ...like my name signature Dominance beyond your grasp That life you talk, I walk the path/ I rip lames, give cause for casts i rip lames ( lame people ) give cause for casts..now i turned into to rhyme buy thinking of what goes with casts and turn it into a nice line ....which it is ... I spit flames, like rocket packs - spit as rap terms...and also same as rockets packs spitting out flamse.... |
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 12:03pm |
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ok sounds cool.. how about long lines.. I got the basic from small line..
Example: These goons retarded level
gone wild, there anger cause them blind
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 2:30pm |
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Ok I also made a Multi... is this ok!
This rat is fat, smell worse than my hat I'm a cat, I'll smash him with metal bat Edited by Rameez - 29 August 2007 at 2:34pm |
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 2:52pm |
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that aint a multi. a multi is rhyming more than one sylabble. for example:
i'm the SLICK-BITCH-HITT-ING ya PIN-DICK-LICK-ING ass to the grave |
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 3:19pm |
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rameez u being serious bro ... ? them lines are wack lol ......dont start getting above your self adding stuff...u need tostart basic by just drop bars and getting a structure and a flow first..bro...
my life been passing away behind bars.. me n my homies been robbing too many cars.. i cannot wait to see the sun shine.. doing it straight no more coke lines.. very very basic lol but it does rhyme ...just try that.. for now and you'll progress with time .. dont expect to be 2pac on the first day lol crawl before u walk |
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 3:29pm |
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and rameez dont battle no 1 yet ..wait until your goood...otherwise you'll end up with a score like myn u dont want 3-wins and 23 loses do u lol
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Dominance beyond your grasp
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 5:51pm |
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For real... lol
thats sucks man.. ya thats why I postin crazy on this tutorial OK here it goes I'm shooting my gun on the block breaking through the door thats lock Then murdering ppl and robing them got everyone upset at funeral anthem click'clock that's my killing rhythm Edited by Rameez - 29 August 2007 at 5:52pm |
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