Mixtapes: Recent Mixtape I Made

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   Surprisingly got over 100 views and a handful of people downloaded it, pretty proud tbh hope I get money for it lol. But nah this was fun to make of course I make shit all the time never know when I'll have the next best. Anyways check it out if you'd like 

http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=449383

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SKullcraneSun Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 19 March 2013 Status: Offline Points: 34 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L	Post Options Post Reply Quote SKullcraneSun Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Recent Mixtape I Made Posted: 20 March 2013 at 3:48am
	Surprisingly got over 100 views and a handful of people downloaded it, pretty proud tbh hope I get money for it lol. But nah this was fun to make of course I make shit all the time never know when I'll have the next best. Anyways check it out if you'd like http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=449383

Sick-Witted Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran Joined: 07 September 2008 Location: The USA Status: Offline Points: 601 Text Rank: #11 Stats: 2-1-0 Form: WWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Sick-Witted Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 March 2013 at 5:08am
	1st track....the instrumental's too loud, hard to follow and understand the words... 2nd track.....eehhh...cool enough to listen to, i'm too drunk to really get into.....sounded cool tho...lol 3rd track....nice calm n smoothe beat, rhymes seems abstract, but the flow was smooth 4th track, not really sure what the theme was...had a kendrick lamar type vibe to it... 5th track, cool beat, a lil too fast paced for me tho....delivery was cool.....still hard to find the topic, seemed like a bunch of random lines strung together... 6th track...instrumental was good, but a bit slow paced....the rhymes were ok 7th and final track....beat was slow, but had a deep and thoughtful type vibe to it.... Overall, you lay good vocals, but i feel like your rhymes were hard to feel due to the lack of you rhyming on solid concepts......so imo, all you really got to do, is find a topic, and consistently rhyme about it, and maybe incorporate a hook, and you're golden
	Sick-Witted->means I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it

Sick-Witted Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran Joined: 07 September 2008 Location: The USA Status: Offline Points: 601 Text Rank: #11 Stats: 2-1-0 Form: WWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Sick-Witted Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 March 2013 at 5:11am
	also, props for posting your mixtape on datpiff.....i get 99% of my mixtapes from that site
	Sick-Witted->means I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it

SKullcraneSun Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 19 March 2013 Status: Offline Points: 34 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L	Post Options Post Reply Quote SKullcraneSun Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 March 2013 at 9:45am
	cool, thanks g I agree for the most part.