Text Battle Archive: [Text] JBrenn Vs joffy428

as soon as you check in or drop Joff ill drop my verse.

bJbrenn is a normal man what else can you really say except thats gay so gay you could turn to a donkey and start eating hay
And calling everyone else gay just incase'they are and want to play taking That chance to get beat up you do it everyday
Battling you is like childs play so you better have came prepared for your lyrical doomsday
its gonna be like bombs and bombs away youd be calling mayday'mayday on a cast away.
its a sad story u died Gory in a nasty way similar to like you got KO ed by a bully who is abnormal at the bus terminal
same year u got fucked up and got framed raped and cloned that day Jbrenn clone #1 is is ur real name tatted right in your illuminum vane

Well its a one sided battle here to be Frank..

Joffy as JBenn stated in his opening line of this battle, (and a wise old saying "know thy enemy")
do a little trawling to gain ammo, and I do mean trawling not trolling!, I've said this to you in past
vote also, spend time and formulate your punches, flesh them out and make them witty or add
a level of depth, and thats where the time factor comes in, you should read his past battles/posts,
do some plays on his alias, and that involves time, i think Cuba just recently commented on your
call outs/battles, you ain't spending time on the task at hand, in some ways I get the impression
you're a bogus account, or at the very least you're just freestyle stuff and hoping for the best in
battles, but there were some improvements to be had with this one, it wasn't a wall of words, and
it actually had a inner rhyme scheme (of sorts), and I apologise now I'm not being a prick here, I'm
trying to give you angles to work with for growth , perhaps some one like Beans if you was serious
could help, because it sure can't hurt, give him a pm who knows, ask him to look over a verse before
you drop, or any active member, it won't hurt throwing out a Bat Signal you dig..

Vote.... JBenn... peace.

can we get this closed before march? Vote ppl even if your on for a minute.

One day this gangster gonna kill somebody dead don’t doubt it
back in the mix packing his usual garbage, what can be said about it?...Nothing this time, but.......
Joffy428.........Dude might always lose but these days the truth is, every single time someone answers his call out he gets a massive win.........keep killing it brother
JB does nothing for the win here but Joffy still managed to die again

Vote JB

Yeah that’s my bad brother
Read Joffy verse and kinda drifted into a coma so never really got to your stuff
I guess Joffski does enough to kill himself every time I read him so the result was always gonna be a given
I got you now though homie
Yeah you keyed this and truth told I thought you opened up on fis six lines with a perfect flow, just got a bit too wordy in the last two so the closing punch felt like a concept that should have been done better to work properly
Nice touches of humour throughout ....To be fair you actually obliterated him for the win
Keep on it brother

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Beans making a good point here

Spumes in trouble

spume corrupt wrote: % Beans tryna hold up Beans cos the top Bean is slipping

Only thing quotable involving slip