Open Mic: **It's GULLY in Woolwich** |
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Manc
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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 6:52pm |
“We swear by almighty Allah we will never stop fighting you until you leave us alone. Your people will never be safe. The only reason we have done this is because Muslims are dying by British soldiers every day. We must fight them as they fight us. An eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth. I apologise that women had to witness this today but in our lands our women have to see the same. You people will never be safe. Remove your government, they don’t care about you. Do you think David Cameron is going to get caught in the street when we start busting our guns? Do you think your politicians are going to die? No, it’s going to be the average guy like you, and your children. So get rid of them. Tell them to bring our troops back so we, so you can all live in peace.” Are you serious?.. Say what?.. We'll never be safe? not with freaks like these weilding machettes and blades to carve bones, his dark tone still showed him red in the face as armed response responded slowly - he readily waits (20 minutes ahead of their pace) The weather's great, both were sittin' scoping for a victim vision fixed upon an innocent, approaching his position, floor it, turbo kicks in, the blokes ferocious with precision cuz they're hopelessly devoted & the motive is religion focused on the mission, they drag him through the street onlookers look in disbelief at what's presumed as meat hacking in full view of the screens like 2 computer geeks as blood oozes and leaks the dudes refuse to cease each swoop induces screams with every gash created they slashed his frame, he thrashed in pain until the lad deflated a "help for heroes" tag defaced quick by this act of hatred splattered stains on slabs of pavement from the captures plateletts I have to state the facts incase "the facts" are jaded Islamists are to blame, this aint ISLAM related the Jihadists stated "get ya flashes activated on ya cameras to take pics we've got no plans to evade pigs - Allah is the greatest!!" R.I.P Lee Rigby I know you'll be sadly missed |
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DressToKill
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Superbly written, this was A1 writing with a mixture of current events. I really liked the opening rhyme scheme, it was flawless! Very well done, dude.
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The original comeback kid
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Kay B
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You know this was great, but i can't really feed it fully being the subject it's about...i was sickened watching it on the news
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Manc
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appreciate that Kay n DTK
i knew this lad personally - can't believe its him. he literally lived round the corner. it's devastating. for those that aint heard about this yet - Lee was 25 and was a serving soldier. he was returning back to his barracks when 2 guys ran him over, got out and proceeded to chop him over and over with meat cleavers. they stabbed him repeatedly, tried to decapitate him, and then as he lay dying, they dragged him into the middle of a busy high street and danced around him chanting god is great. they were asking onlookers to take pictures and film it on there phones. they then waited for the police to arrive and charged the officers shortly before being shot Edited by Manc - 23 May 2013 at 7:22pm |
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BIG GAME
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Thanks for putting that into prospective Manc.
Them idiots are foolish! This piece is rawl bro! I can sense the connection you have with this event thru your lyrics. Great Job Stay up. |
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Vib.Klean
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This was very deep i respect this,props. Its crazy how you knew the guy. What a small world.
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-Orion-
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You knew him? Wow
Shit
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Manc
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Yea man - didn't even realise when they released his name although my
initial thought was that I know a lad with the same name. Doesn't seem
real.
Cheers for the feed lads |
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Kiki Spirez
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Like i've told you on Facebook, this is one of the most technically brilliant things i've ever seen you write, and that's saying something.
So sorry for your loss. I'm very much for people of all religions, all walks of life, and all races coming to our shores. It's what makes us the best collection of countries in the World (as far as being accepting, multicultural and 100% behind free speech). So you know i'm not going at 'immigrants' when I say this.. FUCK ANYONE TRYING TO TERRORIZE US. Fucking British and proud. We'll stand strong for this great lad. And we'll be better than this despicable pussy scum. |
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this was sick as. flow/content was rediculous. props
rip too tho i will say i know plenty of muslims ( and though anyone who actually believes in a religion imo is a either in denial/deluded/crazy ) the few tarnish the rest. for me its like even if there had never been islam or religion, these guys were psycho killers, the rest is an excuse. |
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-Orion-
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Absolutely
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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-Que-
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You killed this Manc! Everything you touch is platt bro! Great work. Dammm...I love how you stood unbiased toward those who practice peacfully.
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Manc
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Thank for the positive feed lads - much appreciated
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J504
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Fuuuuuuucccckkkk.
This right here was like whoa. Sick on multiple levels with flow, wording, storytelling and you did it effortlessly. Add in the element that it hits you so close to home that it puts in in that really real zone. The descriptiveness of the brutality added so much to this and again, trying to make sense of something so senseless.... Yeah, like whoa. This was kinda like the "In the news" concepts you do, but like 1000% more raw. You got this topic on lock, ain't nobody touching this. Bravo kid. |
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spume corrupt
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Mate you told that just how it unfolded.............Hard to believe what the fuck just happened really, you see the picture of that manchester lad on tv and straight away you can tell he's a good kid, what a fucking crime...............You knew him? Oh shitt it feels like me an my family ad half the nation know him and miss him too now
Ya know that locations only a 25 minute cycle from me............Shitts getting deep in it Agree these people wa insane regardless of religion Final thought Rest in peace Lee
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Trizzy Tre
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This right here was dope as fuck. The flow and the way you were able to really capture the image and put it into word was insane. The vocab with your schemes and milti game was fuckin on point! The way you put the story together it really was solid.
There are some crazy mother fuckers out there....
But fuckin great read
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Exoduzt
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This has been all over the New York newspapers... I've been reading up on this and damn...It really is a sick sick world we live in...
I think you laid this shit down perfectly Manc.. "Are you serious?.. Say what?.. We'll never be safe? not with freaks like these weilding machettes and blades to carve bones, his dark tone still showed him red in the face as armed response responded slowly - he readily waits"---flow was perfect and you really set it up nicely... "The weather's great, both were sittin' scoping for a victim vision fixed upon an innocent, approaching his position, floor it, turbo kicks in, the blokes ferocious with precision cuz they're hopelessly devoted & the motive is religion focused on the mission, they drag him through the street onlookers look in disbelief at what's presumed as meat"---you painted such a vivid picture of what actually happened... "as blood oozes and leaks the dudes refuse to cease each swoop induces screams with every gash created they slashed his frame, he thrashed in pain until the lad deflated a "help for heroes" tag defaced quick by this act of hatred splattered stains on slabs of pavement ---the flow is flawless and again the imagery is just crazy dude...cheers to you "I have to state the facts incase "the facts" are jaded Islamists are to blame, this aint ISLAM related the Jihadists stated "get ya flashes activated on ya cameras to take pics we've got no plans to evade pigs - Allah is the greatest!!"---damn OMOTH nominee without a doubt... |
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J Sass
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"each swoop induces screams with every gash created
they slashed his frame, he thrashed in pain until the lad deflated a "help for heroes" tag defaced quick by this act of hatred splattered stains on slabs of pavement from the captures plateletts" - Mancthem bars was crazy my nigga...flow was goin broHG)Sass |
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Junior Shade
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Great piece Manc, flow was impeccable. Nice to have something real dope to read when I pop back for the first time in months!
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Ellduduronron
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Craziness.... I really like how you put it together. Read really nice an painted a good picture. Sorry to hear about your loss. Its a crazy world now days. Rip
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