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Lucky D 
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Joined: 17 November 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1528 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 17-21-0 Form: WWLLLL |
 Posted: 06 August 2013 at 3:53pm |
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Ill vote on this once i get to a pc
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Kiki Spirez
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Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4375 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 06 August 2013 at 3:55pm |
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Cheers Luck.
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Trizzy Tre
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Joined: 28 March 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5101 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 30-7-1 Form: WLWLWW |
Posted: 06 August 2013 at 4:21pm |
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cool man
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Lucky D
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Joined: 17 November 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1528 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 17-21-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Posted: 06 August 2013 at 9:52pm |
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DTK
This battles a canoe ride till you die, got you both on death row! I'm Will Smith in Independence Day the way I'm ending U-FO! This was a good opener, nice nameplay, good job It's like the Law got rid of his partner cuz I'm dropping this guy! Triz's initials are T n T yet couldn't blow the spot if he tried! This one is not to bad either, like the nameplay again He'll drop in demise, his leader tried and left shaking his head.. Fucks so forced with his rhymes you'd think he tried raping the thread! I didn't really like this one, too much. It's just alright And the closest that Triz came to a title was setting the thread for me! It's like a noob wrote your lines..there's no showings of "Eff-or-T" (Effort) Good Closer Kiki FO- *Sigh* - His mother's coke crimes drift in his mind, So fittin' he finds peace inside by pickin' Tre's deficient of lines, Not bad, not great, kinda generic IMO I say it's time I maneuver a stab at this rappin' manure, Laughin' some more- Leader left for Cuba like Assata Shakur, This was decent, like tha finish more than tha set up We batter you bores, bitch please, it's too easy to kick these, Cos simply, Tre's biggest PB is letting Point lead his big piece, Again just decent not really hitting that hard IMO Kid leave's without reason, watch me bounce them heads, We account for their deletion like our announcement threads.. Not that good of a closer. Overall- DTK came really well in this battle, only tha 3 bar didn't really do anything for tha verse. Keeks on tha other hand I was a little disappointed in. It was a nice verse for an OM, but in all honesty I thought that for a short battle verse it was up to your usual. Maybe I didn't get some of it I don't know. Trizzy Tre Fuck Keeks n D! They dying today,.. ya'll cant stop me bitch.. Cuz I’ll have these "two-wish’in"(tuition) for death like L.I. scholarships! Good opener, nice wordplay, and crew diss Thoughtless pricks! D ducked Jay hom, he aint equipped to kill… cuz the only time he waited for a ‘check-in’, was when he’s splitting the bill!! First line was good, but I thought tha follow up lacked Both of ya’ll are ahhh, just ok living off crew sig’s, so how’s that feel? With no ‘offensive lines’ proving you aint shit without your backfield! Decent but not that good Keeks blowing LI like Bagpipes, so hoe u know I got to be right… but I also “kilt” a Dress today, without a Scotsmen in sight! Good closer, that was a nice play about Dress im downin 'em? an you can call me alcoholic girls, coz ill take the W.. K, D ones a rapist potato head, and the other a gay queen!! I don't like gay plays unless there really good, this one wasn't im breakin this tame team.. i dont wanna discourage your mate kee but D you need keep growin that freddie mercury tash.. till it covers ya face.. PLEASE Not bad I guess, no really punch in tha first line and just a jab in tha second nahh, f'real man.. i bet you feel successful now.. is it a lil different?.. coz in real life you went from highschool quarter back.. to fixin fridges (LMAO) I don't see any real attacks here either, fixin' fridges? I-slam ki, hes scared to upset gOd, but im cookin, so ill make this mug break-fast really im only against dress, cause like your career.. your just an extra (GIVE UP..) Not bad closer, although doesn't really rhyme much. But I'll give ya that Overall-- Trizzy you had some nice lines in there, opener was dope, and so was tha closer. Fuck Off your verse lacked. I thought that tha closer was your only good line in the battle. With only 8 lines you should have fire on all of them. Basically it came down to DTK and TT on this one, as Keeks and FO verses were subpar. I thought Dress was a little better IMO, with 3 bars verses Trizzy's 2 bars. It was a close battle that should've been better if Keeks and FO had better verses. DTK Kiki GMV
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DressToKill
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Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6876 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 06 August 2013 at 10:11pm |
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4-1, really appreciate your time and vote Lucky!
Uppin for the win or a swing vote |
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The original comeback kid
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Lucky D
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Joined: 17 November 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1528 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 17-21-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Posted: 06 August 2013 at 10:43pm |
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No Problem
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Dougysnuggy
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Joined: 24 June 2013 Location: Click on that v Status: Offline Points: 1972 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 13-11-5 Form: NWWWWL |
Posted: 06 August 2013 at 11:06pm |
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DTK and Kiki: Both of you had very consistent verses. Some nice punches and not much hard landing personals, but the both of you had dope verses. You both came prepared and both of you had some nice concepts. Kiki, you killed it with those first few lines. As I read it over I was like... Damn. So nice verse from the both of you Tre and Fuck, Tre that first bar was a great concept, honestly. But the wording of it was a bit off. It didn't really flow together. Other than that you had a great verse. I havent read fuck's yet, but if it tops yours than you guys may have won this...
Ehhhh. fuck your first bar didn't rreally land that hard to me. It wasn't really aimed towards anyone. the line didn't really connect with the picture tbh. The second bar wasn't really that good either. the 3rd line was a lot better in terms of delivery and a personal. The fourth bar couldve been worded better imo. you just werent that consistent on personals in this one. MVGT DTK AND KIKI |
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fuckoff
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Joined: 10 April 2013 Location: fucksville Status: Offline Points: 3074 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 27-6-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 06 August 2013 at 11:08pm |
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cOoool glad this is over with. much respect D n Ki your both great battlers. hope you lose tho lol
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Trizzy Tre
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Joined: 28 March 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5101 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 30-7-1 Form: WLWLWW |
Posted: 07 August 2013 at 12:49am |
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Yea good battle fellas....
But I hope dress falls down a flight of stairs and breaks his leg. Keeks ...just off a building. Oh I mean good luck next round  Jokes....jooookes! lol good battle tho |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Joined: 11 October 2007 Status: Offline Points: 2131 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-3-0 Form: WLLWWL |
Posted: 07 August 2013 at 6:31am |
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5-1 DTK and Ki go through
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