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    Posted: 30 May 2014 at 10:17am
4 bars(8 lines)
house rules
no flipping 
no timelimit 
enough of this shit
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Form: WWWWLN 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 May 2014 at 4:23pm
Expos:
1st bar: he lost to everybody so far
2nd: clear
3rd: his battle record
4th: he bites bars from Kwal!ty (the R-R member) , evidence : 


& his verse with The_Guy 


Blue stone's a stoner, but only time he gets high is when he's on a boner
Bitch you're always a loser, if you don't loose one time it means you're dead somewhere in the corner
He shed blood? he did when he beheaded his disliked bird
You're bars are messy man they need work, they smell like turd
18 losses dude? how come you're still alive and breathing!
You're fucking screwed,  just  take my advice and start leaving
This mouse is a fighter, but what he do against a lion? 
He's a proper biter, he bites from Kwal!ty or maybe Orion...
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Form: WWWWLN 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 May 2014 at 4:39pm
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I have a tons of gangsta rhymes,your just a Kilo G,
matter a fact,my mom is bigger gangsta,your a fuckin Zero G,
This fag got no location and his house is full of mystery,
he fool's his dad to delete his mom's porn history,Thumbs Up
i'm gonna knock you down with a bent fender,
bitches keep asking me "u killed which gender??",Confused
you ain't a rapper u'a just a stone in a kidney, still think u beat me??
bitch your IQ is equal to number of hairs on old britney,LOL 
enough of this shit
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Okay so i thought this was a somewhat average battle with both of you having some okay lines in it. Personals could've been much harder if maybe structured differently, but they were there, considering it the most hitting part of this battle in form of direct attempts. Flow was also nice in some points!
Anyways, i will go bar by bar:

Originally posted by Kilo G Kilo G wrote:

Blue stone's a stoner, but only time he gets high is when he's on a boner
Bitch you're always a loser, if you don't loose one time it means you're dead somewhere in the corner
opener was okay referring to his name, personals were in both lines somewhat decent and flow was alright although boner and corner doesnt rhyme for me but alright ! 

Originally posted by Kilo G Kilo G wrote:

 He shed blood? he did when he beheaded his disliked bird
You're bars are messy man they need work, they smell like turd
not sure what to think of this bird line, the rhyming was nice here though 

Originally posted by Kilo G Kilo G wrote:

 18 losses dude? how come you're still alive and breathing!
You're fucking screwed,  just  take my advice and start leaving
ok nice attempt at personal, again a decent flow, second was okay..

Originally posted by Kilo G Kilo G wrote:

This mouse is a fighter, but what he do against a lion? 
He's a proper biter, he bites from Kwal!ty or maybe Orion...
i really liked the smoothness of the flow and rhyming here, personals were also somewhat okay, an alright closure here
To sum up, your text was average/alright with some quite nice attempts of personals, like the scheme and flow was nice here !


Originally posted by blue stone blue stone wrote:

I have a tons of gangsta rhymes,your just a Kilo G,
matter a fact,my mom is bigger gangsta,your a fuckin Zero G,

hmm cant feel that one, think its your weakest bar in this battle but flow was okay

Originally posted by blue stone blue stone wrote:

 fag got no location and his house is full of mystery,
he fool's his dad to delete his mom's porn history,Thumbs Up
attempt at personal was there

Originally posted by blue stone blue stone wrote:

 gonna knock you down with a bent fender,
bitches keep asking me "u killed which gender??",Confused
personal was okay, if worded differently couldve been nice

Originally posted by blue stone blue stone wrote:

you ain't a rapper u'a just a stone in a kidney, still think u beat me??
bitch your IQ is equal to number of hairs on old britney,LOL 

hmm couldnt feel that one as well, rhyme was okay though !
Overall you had some attempts at personals, flow was off partly but some words just didnt rhyme for me.

Kilo G gets my vote for reasons above ! 
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Flow(+1): Kilo G
Multis(+2) BS
Creativity(+2): kilo
Punches(+3):  Kilo
Personals(+3) Kilo(barely)
Vocab(+4): Killo
Complexity(+4) Kilo(Close)
Winning more categories gives you an advantage point of + 1.

mvgto Killo G for having a slightly better verse and ending more cats
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Form: WLLWLL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 June 2014 at 4:33pm
Kilo G, Please check the Battle Rules, you can only up 24hrs after the last post (which you did) but you cannot up your battle if the last post was not a vote or a verse. Basically you had 2 ups in a row, this is not allowed.


Kwan, your vote is shit. I told you there was a bare minimum standard for votes, yours does not meet it. You have to actually explain your vote with a few paragraphs. Then you can add on bar break down or category bullshit on top of that.

As it is, that vote is shit and disallowed.

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Form: WWLLWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 June 2014 at 5:01pm
Kilo

I liked your verse but i feel like you can do alot better
On your punches and your flow appears a little too stretched
But i see you are workin on your flow just remember simplicity
Is often the more sophosticated approach
But your verse was okay you landed a few punches and got your
Point across

Blue

Your opener was a waste for the punch lacked incredibly
It wasnt even a punch ' felt it was too generic too be one
Your whole verse for that matter was full of misses i feel you
Dont have direction yet thats somin you should work on soon
Before attempting to battle again i feel you should hit the tutorials

Mvgt kilo for a better battle verse
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Form: WWWN 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 June 2014 at 6:13pm
I was gonna vote on this, but it seems like 2 rules have been broken as evidenced in this thread (As far as I can tell.)  Firstly, if blue stone's a biter then he needs banning. Secondly, Kilo G using RR is an off-site personal? Can a mod clear this up for me before I vote?
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Form: WWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 June 2014 at 6:53pm
Horrible, horrible, horrible, horrible, horrible battle. I'ma keep this short and sweet.

Kilo, your opener was shit. Didn't even barely rhyme except for shitty internals. You're flow kept going from short, to choppy, to good, to bad. It was all over the place for me. You're punches just didn't connect at all and you didn't have any personal attempts. Also, stop putting pointless expos like #2 & #3, that shit's annoying. 2.8/10

Blue, I don't know what the fuck you are on, but stop using it. You're flow was decent AT BEST, but that's it. Your punches were awful, and you didn't have any personals other than talking about his parents. You didn't hit hard with anything, and that's a red flag to begin with. HONESTLY, I would seriously fucking have to give you a sorry 1.9/10

KO FOR KILO G

Step the fuck up, and KwanTem, what the hell was that kinda vote?
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