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Lucky D 
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 Topic: Lyricist IncPosted: 19 September 2010 at 9:05pm |
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Lucky D You compare us to who..legends with priceless writings Christ-like precisness enlightings with these rightous titans Our words of wisdom hightens tha most weakest of systems Depictin' this mission for most artisans and christians Blow through your prisms.. my persistants penance True whos tha menace..troop through and fool tha peasents Past and present look back with a pastors presences Crash through heavens uncaged them bastard sentence Turtle So we write egyptian hyroglyphics, you wouldent get it like scientific- But to be specific its prolyphic like humanistic biophysics.. in order to be on our level you would need materialistic lyrical fitness.. Even then you may scratch the surface, so consider this a miracle witness.. We're competitive with concepts that age like historical monuments- So this is a last chance event that will benefit your personal documents.. Take notes boys, jot em down cause this talent is hard to defeat- these boys from Lyricist Inc will leave you deep in the belly of the beast. Matt the Ripper We philosophical writers droppin gold when our thoughts unfold You ain't as fresh as us, all you jokes have already gotten old You better than us? That's impossible, this crew's unstoppable Don't get in our way, or we'll send ya straight to the hospital We're fuckin hostile, y'all, I honestly wouldn't get in our way cause the truth is this is our game, we're just lettin you play We're reppin L.A., so if ya textin is lame, we lettin ya know We on another level, ya can reach, but ya ain't gettin us, though Capture Fresh to the Inc, Like a Newly written essay I wordplay, He say, She say, It only matters what We Say..(LI) Because when we speak, You pay, Pay attention closely We brag, talk shit, kick ass, Call It "Confidential Boasting" All your lyrics are irrelevant, Quit LA and secure Retirement Fuck You If you're Not LI, We Burn Bridges, Fuck Firemen You could learn from us, I Did, Out of pure Admiration You Bitches Cant Even Touch The Inc, Consider This Pure Consolidation Manc I'll say I'm sorry in advance if my pro writtens offend ya but I'm no Lady Gaga & there's no hidden gender I'm LI yet apparently I sneak like a stealth guy - that's why these mouths run just like Neek when he smells pie but fuck it, it's all gravy & I aint rockin' no boats just invest in giving my 2 Cents but aint coppin' no votes it's all good though, cuz LI is the crew to make ya friends doubt if INC is surging through us like a bunch of crazy pen pals - so think ya something maybe some kid may just fight you and snap ya back the fact is that that kid would be from my crew
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 19 September 2010 at 9:21pm |
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Lucky - Nice verse man. Nice rhyme scheme, and the alliteration was cool too. Great vocab, some of it out of no where.
Turtle - opening bar was killer. Rest of the verse not up to it, scratch the surface a bit played, some nice concepts though. Matt - said the same shit about 3 times. lol. rhyme scheme was nice, a couple nice plays in there, but pretty basic in terms of depth compared to the first two pieces. Cap - nice verse. Nothing overly complex, but still pretty decent. Nice flow, good multis. Manc - brilliant.
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TURTLE
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Posted: 19 September 2010 at 9:26pm |
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Good lookin on checkin this out NEP!! Thanks. . . |
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rapdisup
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Posted: 19 September 2010 at 9:38pm |
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ill feed with honesty also....
LD shyt was nice bro ya already knew that seein as i had a verse lol wordplay was insane dope drop man! matt an turtle both had good flow an rhymes,Ts opener was nice,but matt as nep sed realy,still nice tho cap ya had nice stuff in there a lil new to the crew hype stuff but still nice man manc rockin boats was nice the votes bit hit well,as for the closer........ill leave that too ya,asumin i know wat that was tryna mean....jus meh on that note overall D brought the heat an rest followed nicely keep talkin' together as a CREW an there shudnt be no problems ya know
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
It aint over till I Rapdisup |
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TURTLE
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Posted: 19 September 2010 at 10:00pm |
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Thanks Raps!! |
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 19 September 2010 at 10:25pm |
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What it do. |
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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Lucky D
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Posted: 19 September 2010 at 10:26pm |
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Thanks Neppo and Raps
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~EviL~
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Posted: 19 September 2010 at 10:57pm |
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Real Nice collab, I liked this!
Nice crew collab. It was a nice read, It all layed out very well (could have done without the 4th verse) but aye, whatever.
Nice shit tho, I even read it a few times. Good Job LI  Edited by ~EviL~ - 19 September 2010 at 10:59pm |
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TURTLE
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Posted: 19 September 2010 at 11:20pm |
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Thanks EviL for checkin it out!!! |
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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 3:17am |
lmao that had me rollin.. haha well I see some improvement in these spits, turtle u doing better than b4... but some of you still need to push a bit.. keep at it gud luck.. Edited by Rameez - 20 September 2010 at 3:18am |
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TURTLE
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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 4:26am |
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Thats wasup, coo. .^^^ |
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Capture
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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 7:18am |
Says the pussy who took forever and a day to drop a verse against me. . . Edited by Capture - 20 September 2010 at 7:21am |
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Lyrically Force Niggaz To Spit It Like Masturbation.....The Next Generation
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~EviL~
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Posted: 20 September 2010 at 12:24pm |
Now let's see if you take forever and a day to reply
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Posted: 21 September 2010 at 6:15pm |
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all of yal did ya thang.....
Glad to see how everybody Stepped they Shyt up...Turtle....im fuckin proud of you my nigga
LD, real nice...keep droppin that shyt yall
NLEI!!!
Sass
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TURTLE
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Posted: 21 September 2010 at 7:11pm |
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Ya this was a good collab I thought. Thanks for checkin it out!! . .when you gonna come back to LI?? |
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Posted: 22 September 2010 at 6:48pm |
Good shit by everybody
 L.I. is one hell of a crew now, seriously impressed by the way this turned out and how everybody flowed together. I think Lucky tore shit up! That's some of the best I've see from you, boss!
Keep at it, looking forward to collabin' with all of you.
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Posted: 23 September 2010 at 5:20pm |
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great collab, lucky and manc bodied it
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Posted: 26 October 2010 at 4:46pm |
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Lyrically Force Niggaz To Spit It Like Masturbation.....The Next Generation
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