Open Mic: On and Off (feat. NepentheZ)

 Post Reply Post Reply
Author
CHAIN View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member
Avatar

Joined: 14 November 2006
Status: Offline
Points: 2769

Reigning Open Mic King

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 8-4-0
Form: LWWLWW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote CHAIN Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Topic: On and Off (feat. NepentheZ)
    Posted: 14 June 2009 at 9:32pm
we lost the finals, but we're back...hard, pause 
 
[Chain]
 
Rhythm is this thing that their flows aren’t keen on

What happens to their punches if I put a beat on?

Or this is a subject I really shouldn’t speak on?

Knowing that the truth hurts, meaning that the beef’s on

Once I drop subliminals u fiends couldn’t sleep on

Doper than a ‘brick’ when I get my ‘key’ on

High for 10 decades when I get my ‘e’ on

If u think this will wake ‘em up…dream on!

Checkmating kingdoms when I get my freak on

The weakest on the board are the bitches that I ‘pee on’

Peons will be gone once I put my peeps on

Piece on their hips getting they Clint East’ on

Squeezing through percussion that we feast on

Turning up the heat our vocal chords will skeet on

Fuck a multi, I gets my ‘tongue-in-cheek’ on

Got ‘em asking things like: ‘what type of shit is He on?’

Looking at me like, this ain’t sumthn I should keep on   

Like walking through a mosque with my fucking sneaks’ on

Either show respect or getcha ‘Ctrl C’ on

I’m ill, I think that much we can agree on

I never hit notes ‘cause I gets my M.C on

While snitches at the precinct get they Do-Re-Mi on

 

[NepentheZ]

 

You know thats my boy Chain, turnin' it on

but I'm coming back to flip this shit,  burnin' it off ....

 

Officially, I'm not a kinda topical texta,

but right now we here eatin' this Offal for breakfast

what do you Offer to Nep? Nothin', demented with lyrics

'cos anything you ever dropped you just Offending me with it

I got plenty to bring, its crazy if you think you taking it Off me

an if you get too pushy right here, we can start takin' it Off Screen

I murder emcees, Neps ya man to just Off him

fucking you up so bad in 9 months you havin' my Offspring

my style its real grimey, leavin' Office gentlemen militant

'cos everything Offkey is Offensively brilliant

none of you rappers can Officiate the punches I bore

so bowl down with your strong arm, watch me Off stump him for four

you Offtrack emcee's try to copy us? Nah, Crazy

I got more chance of gettin' a beat down from Officer barbrady

don't ever wanna battle, v Me you'll get Blast Off

We got them Cheap Em'seas for Sail, who are easily Cast Off

don't come near me swinging them fist, or I'll be Off with ya Arms

an now we got cats who wanna team up with Nep, but you're not Offered the chance

 
 
 
NEW ERA, THE TRUTH....
 


Edited by CHAIN - 14 June 2009 at 9:33pm
Back to Top
NepentheZ View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member
Avatar
... { 26 } ...

Joined: 11 October 2004
Location: Yea..Cake. Man
Status: Offline
Points: 7727

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 40-32-1
Form: WWLWLW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote NepentheZ Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 June 2009 at 9:34pm
Good shit man, your verse is crazy.






I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...
Back to Top
Junior Shade View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member

Aka UnaBomber

Joined: 07 June 2005
Location: UK
Status: Offline
Points: 5015

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 55-14-6
Form: LWWWLW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Junior Shade Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 June 2009 at 9:43pm
Haha.. This is dopeness.. Chain's verse was insane..

Props both..
Back to Top
Rhymez View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member
Avatar

Joined: 13 April 2008
Status: Offline
Points: 163
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Rhymez Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 June 2009 at 9:52pm
Best collab i ever read on here chain went in
'jaemills' trying to beat me is like a broke pencil. there aint no point
Back to Top
Cuba View Drop Down
Senior Moderator
Senior Moderator

Legendary Assassin

Joined: 14 June 2004
Location: England
Status: Offline
Points: 12332

King of LA

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 47-22-0
Form: WWWWLW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Cuba Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 June 2009 at 10:09pm
Wow.
Back to Top
Tesla View Drop Down
Groupie
Groupie
Avatar

Joined: 11 June 2009
Location: Sheffield,UK
Status: Offline
Points: 64

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 0-2-0
Form: LL
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Tesla Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 June 2009 at 10:21pm
chain this is the first bit of material ive read form you and i gotta say man it was nice 

nep nice verse man up to the usual standard ive come to expect from your work 

overall id rate it a 9/10
prophecy is fulfilled when my fingers dance the pencil
Back to Top
Calibra View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member
Avatar

Joined: 28 March 2008
Location: Newcastle, UK
Status: Offline
Points: 2969

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 20-3-1
Form: WWWWWN
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Calibra Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 June 2009 at 8:16am
This is why you can't fuck with us.... Damn we're dope!
Back to Top
Madeye View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member
Avatar

Joined: 25 March 2008
Location: Canada
Status: Offline
Points: 1177

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 8-4-0
Form: WWLLLL
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Madeye Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 June 2009 at 8:38pm
Well formulated, Famz.
Genius collab, imo.  Liking Nep's contribution best.
Both verses were well written.  Nice @ both.
~iLLy
 
One ['1]
<font color=darkgray>I'm only offended by those I respect... and I don't respect you[/COLOR]
Back to Top
aminal View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member
Avatar

Joined: 15 May 2009
Status: Offline
Points: 245

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 3-6-0
Form: LLWWLL
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote aminal Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 June 2009 at 5:24am
since when is it hard to rhyme the same word 24 times? chain your verse was ill i'm not taking anything away from that, but its pretty easy to write a good bar when you dont have to worry about rhyming...


Back to Top
Cuba View Drop Down
Senior Moderator
Senior Moderator

Legendary Assassin

Joined: 14 June 2004
Location: England
Status: Offline
Points: 12332

King of LA

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 47-22-0
Form: WWWWLW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Cuba Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 June 2009 at 10:51am
^ Well he did still have to worry about rhyming, coz he used a multi...so he was rhyming the first syllable differently then on everytime, probably makes it a little bit harder to think of a line that hits if you gotta say 'on' at the end of every line...not that I think it was amazingly hard, but overall it was still pretty dope
Back to Top
 Post Reply Post Reply
  Share Topic   

Forum Jump Forum Permissions View Drop Down