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Cee-Jay Outlaw 
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 Topic: Round 2: DTK and Ki vs PB and CPosted: 08 August 2013 at 3:30pm |
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8 lines each
Due 16th August Midnight Good luck Fellas
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 3:29pm |
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Ki and DTK
These days P sways like a Hilsborough fence, forgotten to stand better,
Point S- P.S with an obsession to 'M like the bottom of Stan's letter,
His man's a 'bland setter', slow drop, known flop.. Ex champ is no martyr
His views hope for Mo' Bots, so I have to beat the Cube like Mo Farah,
A non starter- No title to get docked, and P's free's seem less hot,
Sex blocked from their desktop = Couldn't get off soon as the Dress dropped,
Let's stop with the bullshit- P has no metal, like I refused to use a piss can,
We'll laugh at lack of PC, like ending a gross explosion joke with 'ISLAM!' *Hilsborough was a disaster where Liverpool fans died cos of overcrowding in a poorly maintained stand, and a lot got crushed against the fences. Points a Liverpool fan.
*P.S- At the end of a letter, Point has had a thing for Manc, Stan wrote a letter to 'Em'.
*Mo Farah is a British athlete, and was the first person to 'beat the Cube' on the UK show, 'The Cube'. Farah's move is the 'Mo Bot' - 'More Bots'.
*DressToKill dropped them both, first to get the text belt off of Cuba, then to defend it from Point. *P has no metal - P can be a nickname for dick.
*'PC' - Political Correctness - 'Point Cuba'.
Expos : * In --->http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/mcotm-july-2013_topic26220.html Cuba said I dropped "Sub par" in my verse vs Point, yet I KO'ed him. I guess my worst shit knocks him out!* * * * Individually murdered you both..add Kiki, the team is fatal!The only time Cube is coming on Point is when giving Dean a facial! Point, he ain't able! Made the L.I. Rejects, needed his own crew! Musta been recruiting noobs! Cuz he wouldn't battle with his own dudes!! (True!) Thirsty for fame! We're a Dukes of Hazard horror remake..General-Lee feared! Cuba a true champion? How!? He had no title defenses in THREE YEARS! Plus he already condemned Point! Let me break it down for folks.. Claimed I dropped subpar? I guess my worst is leaving him clowned for jokes!* Damn.. Edited by Scotty32 - 21 August 2013 at 4:45pm |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Joined: 11 October 2007 Status: Offline Points: 2131 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-3-0 Form: WLLWWL |
Posted: 20 August 2013 at 3:30pm |
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Point and Cuba
This gay team of homos hate being so-low like KayB in Soho About to drop a few hits and get forgotten faster than K-Ci and JoJo We'll disgrace Keeks it's no joke, and Dress? We know that this guy sucksTheir team has been second to us since the moment they signed up (co-sign bruh!!) We're too potent to size up, our words make the whole game change While Dress is only champ cos the noobs ain't hearda them old nameplays I heard LI's 'ride or die' so they on each others genitals quivering These two pussies grinding on each other more than lesbians scissoring The text we're delivering will diminish these faggot's lines Got Keeks struggling with Dress like auditions for pantomimes Cos we're the golden pros with holy flows like hosepipes in churches You only punch consistently if Manc's around to ghostwrite ya verses And since CJ's deleting every post that's embarrassing ya crew It won't be long until both your verses are vanishing from view And fuck what he said, we didn't need to 'bring our best' to defeat yas We've brought an end to DK like fuckin dental procedures... For the last bar, their initials together are DK (decay) Edited by Cee-Jay Outlaw - 21 August 2013 at 5:39pm |
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504  Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 20 August 2013 at 11:26pm |
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I enjoyed reading this battle. Due to the crew cat fighting that has been going on. I will not drop a vote on this.
But I'll bump it up... Put some votes on it people.
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levy420
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Joined: 22 May 2013 Location: San Antonio TX Status: Offline Points: 3443 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 39-33-4 Form: LWWLLN |
Posted: 20 August 2013 at 11:38pm |
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This battle punch n personal wise was pretty close
ki- 1st bar may of went over my head but it didnt hit for me n wirding coulda been smoother for a better read after thst your verse picked up n ended strongly Dtk- your open was good n a great punch wit the second line thought u had the better verse outta u an kiki also enjoyed your closer pb/cuba- ur verse trumped any high points ki or dtk had in there verses u guys played well off eachother n put together a real solid peice all in all came accross smoother n mad it hit harder to me mvgt cuba n point |
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 4:05pm |
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Thanks for the vote Levy.
For anyone else that doesn't get that first bar, S is Points second name.
Edited by Scotty32 - 21 August 2013 at 4:45pm |
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Vib.Klean
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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 4:40pm |
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Ki
These days P sways like a Hilsborough fence, forgotten to stand better, Point S- P.S with an obsession to 'M like the bottom of Stan's letter, ur best line pretty good/kinda funny way to start off 8/10 set up well His man's a 'bland setter', slow drop, known flop.. Ex champ is no martyr His views hope for Mo' Bots, so I have to beat the Cube like Mo Farah, this was alright the wordplay was there 6/10 A non starter- No title to get docked, and P's free's seem less hot, Sex blocked from their desktop = Couldn't get off soon as the Dress dropped, ehhh wasn't really feelin this bar, it was ok 5 /10 Let's stop with the bullshit- P has no metal, like I refused to use a piss can, We'll laugh at lack of PC, like ending a gross explosion joke with 'ISLAM!' ur weakest bar of the battle imo 4/10 OVERALL PUNCH FACTOR: 23/40 pros: flow was good as always, multis were there and you had some good concepts,intro was funny cons: felt you could of been more aggressive, some bars were just nameplays with no personal concepts tied, ur wording could of made more sense on some bars Individually murdered you both..add Kiki, the team is fatal! The only time Cube is coming on Point is when giving Dean a facial! funny as fuck 9/10 Point, he ain't able! Made the L.I. Rejects, needed his own crew! Musta been recruiting noobs! Cuz he wouldn't battle with his own dudes!! (True!) kind of a weak bar wasn't really feelin it, personal was there 5/10 Thirsty for fame! We're a Dukes of Hazard horror remake..General-Lee feared! Cuba a true champion? How!? He had no title defenses in THREE YEARS! this one made me laugh 8/10 was an exaggeration but still funny set up helped boost score Plus he already condemned Point! Let me break it down for folks.. Claimed I dropped subpar? I guess my worst is leaving him clowned for jokes!* decent way to end it could of been more creative 5.5/10 overall punch factor: 27.5/40 pros: had good concepts, decent wording and were the stronger side of ur team on this one cons: closer was a weak line, flow was slightly stretched but nothing that effected reading. could of been more creative COMBINED SCORE: :50.5/80 Cuba and Point blank This gay team of homos hate being so-low like KayB in Soho About to drop a few hits and get forgotten faster than K-Ci and JoJo
great punch perfect way to start off 9/10 We'll disgrace Keeks it's no joke, and Dress? We know that this guy sucks Their team has been second to us since the moment they signed updamn this was another good personal 9/10 think i already know whos gonna win We're too potent to size up, our words make the whole game change While Dress is only champ cos the noobs ain't hearda them old nameplays I heard LI's 'ride or die' so they on each others genitals quiveringfunny but felt like pb was being lazy on this weakest bar 5/10 These two pussies grinding on each other more than lesbians scissoring another slightly fillerish line kind of immature but worded strong 6/10 bit better than the last 1The text we're delivering will diminish these faggot's lines Got Keeks struggling with Dress like auditions for pantomimesbar of the battle 11/10 Cos we're the golden pros with holy flows like hosepipes in churches You only punch consistently if Manc's around to ghostwrite ya verses dont know if thats true or not but if it isnt then 8/10 strongly executed regardless. if its true its a 10/10 great rhthm/flow as well and set up And since CJ's deleting every post that's embarrassing ya crew It won't be long until both your verses are vanishing from view another 9great bar 9/10 set up great looks like you guys really started pickin up steam from here to finish it off And fuck what he said, we didn't need to 'bring our best' to defeat yas We've brought an end to DK like fuckin dental procedures... weak way to end it thought the pantomime would of been a better closer 5/10 oVERALL 65/80 great battle, thats an honest break down so i don't want no 1 bitchin. funny as fuck but cuba and pb put on a show farreal. good luck to every1. Edited by Scotty32 - 21 August 2013 at 4:45pm |
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Point Blank
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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 4:52pm |
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Thanks for the votes anyway, 2-0 me & Cuba
Edited by Cee-Jay Outlaw - 21 August 2013 at 5:24pm |
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Exoduzt
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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 9:12pm |
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Am I allowed to vote on this?
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 9:19pm |
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as long as votes are fair and explained yes
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levy420
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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 9:50pm |
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Bump!! Lets get the votes goin guys
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Dougysnuggy
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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 9:55pm |
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Honestly, I think DTK and KIKI took this. I saw it when I was banned. Pb and cube.. You had some nice lines, and sure DTK had a false personal, but that doesn't take away all the other lines he had in there. Kiki had some nice lines too. I think they did enough to take this. Cube and PB had some mixed up lines in there, but they weren't bad. Keep up guys.
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DressToKill
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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 10:12pm |
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2-1 thanks, Douggy
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The original comeback kid
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DressToKill
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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 5:10pm |
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1-2 Bumping
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The original comeback kid
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Brotha Goose
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 3:48am |
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Ill my vote in if ya'll want, I just figured my being a "vested party" would render my vote as one in bad tate.
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DressToKill
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 11:56am |
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Not at all, dude. Let it fly, I trust you'll be honest
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The original comeback kid
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The Law
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 4:37pm |
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bumping this up for them
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Zinaii
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 8:45pm |
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These days P sways like a Hilsborough fence, forgotten to stand better,
Point S- P.S with an obsession to 'M like the bottom of Stan's letter, His man's a 'bland setter', slow drop, known flop.. Ex champ is no martyr great use of inners flowed nice this creative take on a p.s. flip very nice 5/5 His views hope for Mo' Bots, so I have to beat the Cube like Mo Farah, A non starter- No title to get docked, and P's free's seem less hot, Sex blocked from their desktop = Couldn't get off soon as the Dress dropped, this was an effective line but i think u had so much to add in on this bar it kinda clamored it up and streched it 3/5 Let's stop with the bullshit- P has no metal, like I refused to use a piss can, We'll laugh at lack of PC, like ending a gross explosion joke with 'ISLAM!' once i read the expo i was like ooooooo ok this is a nice ender lmao its actually hilarious the opener on this line wasnt great but that closer set it off good shit 4/5 Hilsborough was a disaster where Liverpool fans died cos of overcrowding in a poorly maintained stand, and a lot got crushed against the fences. Points a Liverpool fan. *P.S- At the end of a letter, Point has had a thing for Manc, Stan wrote a letter to 'Em'. *Mo Farah is a British athlete, and was the first person to 'beat the Cube' on the UK show, 'The Cube'. Farah's move is the 'Mo Bot' - 'More Bots'. *DressToKill dropped them both, first to get the text belt off of Cuba, then to defend it from Point. P has no metal - P can be a nickname for dick. *'PC' - Political Correctness - 'Point Cuba' Cuba said I dropped "Sub par" in my verse vs Point, yet I KO'ed him. I guess my worst shit knocks him out! Individually murdered you both..add Kiki, the team is fatal! The only time Cube is coming on Point is when giving Dean a facial! lol this was a straight up insult simple and short nice opener 4/5 Point, he ain't able! Made the L.I. Rejects, needed his own crew! Musta been recruiting noobs! Cuz he wouldn't battle with his own dudes!! (True!) 3.5/5 nice personal so far ur bein very direct and harsh i like the tone to this point of your verse 3.5/5 Thirsty for fame! We're a Dukes of Hazard horror remake..General-Lee feared! Cuba a true champion? How!? He had no title defenses in THREE YEARS! 4/5 good direct attack nice personal Plus he already condemned Point! Let me break it down for folks..claimed I dropped subpar? I guess my worst is leaving him clowned for jokes!* Damn.. 4/5 overall surprising verse from dtk as im used to seeing him drop more wp and pl but these were very good disses very good personals and what i like even better is that kiki brought the sick wp and pl and dtk just came with hardhitting direct personals this was a great read fellas my only complaint is kiki was a little lengthy in places but none the less good verses 30.5/50 |
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Zinaii
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 8:53pm |
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This gay team of homos hate being so-low like KayB in Soho
About to drop a few hits and get forgotten faster than K-Ci and JoJo i like how this flowed wasnt on fire or anything but very nice way to set the tone 3/5 We'll disgrace Keeks it's no joke, and Dress? We know that this guy sucks Their team has been second to us since the moment they signed up (co-sign bruh!!) this was just a good bar to sum it up but not great 3/5 We're too potent to size up, our words make the whole game change While Dress is only champ cos the noobs ain't hearda them old nameplays lol this was nice seems like the verse is picking up steam now nice flow as well 4/5 I heard LI's 'ride or die' so they on each others genitals quivering These two pussies grinding on each other more than lesbians scissoring lololololol this was a funny visual and a nice complex multi 4/5 The text we're delivering will diminish these faggot's lines Got Keeks struggling with Dress like auditions for pantomimes lol another good line flows still consistent and i like the concept 4/5 Cos we're the golden pros with holy flows like hosepipes in churches You only punch consistently if Manc's around to ghostwrite ya verses this was a decent jab i liked the first line of the bar just didnt end as good as it started imo 3/5 And since CJ's deleting every post that's embarrassing ya crew It won't be long until both your verses are vanishing from view nniiiceeee this was hardhitting good shit 4/5 And fuck what he said, we didn't need to 'bring our best' to defeat yas We've brought an end to DK like fuckin dental procedures... decent closer but not the best but still a nice np on both of them 3/5 this was a good verse u guys started out somewhat slow in the beginning just because kiki came out on fire in his verse but towards the middle u guys brought it back up to speed the flow was effortless throughtout the entire verse that scissoring line was crack and the cj line was nice as well.great drop guys 29/50 |
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Zinaii
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 8:56pm |
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as u can see by the score this battle was super close. ki brought heat on his verse and i enjoyed how dtk came with the harsh personals. both styles went really good together. pb and cube brought it also i just think those first two lines while although good they werent as hard as it would take to knock ki and dtk i mean were talking it could be a win or loss by one point kno wat i mean? but this was a classic battle very good read DTK and ki get my vote good shit both
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