Assassins vs The Dynasty: Stalin vs. Freeda5thDawg

Dynasty: Freeda5thDawg
Assasins: Stalin

Blind drops to Scotty32 (Me)
Verses due Sunday, Dec 10
14-20 lines each battle

Stalin:

Aint no space left for this kid, so I'll have u restin wit Big
Cuz Ill make ya beatin more unbearable then the text in ya sig
too many cats on LA, but ima tell u I aint the kind to fuck wit
cuz Ill be quick to bitch slap u so hard u'll be back at RhyminRuckus
u better try enough kid, or ya crew'll be replacin u like a broken light
Man, why the fuck are we battlin? U better keep ur bitch ass in Open Mic
A bunch of bitches rush to LA, Im wonderin who else did u bring here?
I would just kick u inbetween the legs, but my foot would be the only thing there!
The Dynastys full of bitches that actin ill, so im lettin u know yall better stop
u cant even legally smoke, so anything that come out ya mouth is never hot
I dont understand it, Freeda5thDawg, yet this pro aint rhyme
All ya shit is stretched longer than Bob & Whitneys cocaine lines
ima rip him straight, whats he gonna do when no flippins played
fuck Freeda5th, Change ya name to Pleadda5th cuz u aint got shit to say
I admit u can rhyme alot and maybe make it flow
Get on ur knees and thank me cuz I fuckin gave u PRO

Freeda5thDawg:

Battle assassins?...
I’ll encompass ‘LIN’ quicker than interconnects when ‘vehicles’ crash-in- -
And bash ya grill FAST when the rapfist grabs ‘20BITS’ of ya gadgets- -
Leave ya gaseous like ashes after the burns - And SCATTER my words- -
Cause I happen to learn...
Only way I’m ‘matching ya verse’ is playing SCRAMBLE with verbs- -
While he’s gambling first - I’ll ‘handle this jerk’ WORST than amateur perves- -
And trample the nerd till his ‘cord’ twirps and starts disbanding the ‘nerves’- -
Before you chant that it hurts...
You must withstand flows when the hand-chrome expels deep in ya anus- -
Leave ya ‘man-hole’ with ‘shells’ even ‘THE FOOT’ feels it needed to ‘break-in’- -
Creep with the stainless...
But there’s no need to be stating I burst guns - My cursed tongue can shout swords- -
STABBING’s my business - You ain’t HARD - I just got my work CUT OUT for- -
While you preserving doubt, hordes of words force through like warriors- -
How you claim assassin?...
When I’ll destroy-ya-CREW worst than orbiters when storms-occurred- -
Even if the floor-reversed - You couldn’t top 5th’s mental- -
And I ain’t talking ‘Buddha History’ when I say I SHOT-LIN’S TEMPLE(Shaolin’s Temple)- -
My credentials are ‘ill’ - Even Stalin mentions “Dogs suffer the sickness”- -
And after this ‘tragedy’ - Dynasty will make sure it lives up to ‘statistics’- -
You can’t bump with the sick shit - Never mad when speaking with ad-libs- -
Even if you captained assassins - You’d still be a ‘Leader IN-PRACTICE’- -

EXPLANATIONS:
LIN
-communication system(interconnections) for electronic systems in ‘vehicles’
-speed up to 20kbits
Scramble = Self-Exp
Amateur Perves = Self-Exp
Cord = Spinal Cord = Nerve Transmitter
Manhole  - Double Meaning
1- Anus, FOOT in the ass
2-Manhole, Ninja Turtles = Shells, “THE FOOT” = The enemies that ‘break-in’ the turtle’s ‘manhole’ home
Stabbing Business/Work Cutout For = Self-Exp
CREW = Assassin and/or Crew inside an ‘orbiter’ dying in ‘space storm’

Last Lines refer to ‘Joseph STALIN’
1st Line - “Gratitude is a sickness, suffered by dogs.” - Joseph Stalin
2nd Line - “A single death is a tragedy; a million deaths is a statistic.” - Joseph Stalin
4th Line - Joseph Stalin is a ‘de facto leader’, de facto stands for “in practice”...put it all together.

almost too late till i got a reminder pm a while ago, *sigh* well here it is...didnt want to fail my crew...

Stretching the concept (verb): Having a verse where explanations are needed but they seemed forced, like the 'LIN' line above. The Shot Lin's temple shit was so forced it just didn't work. Overall, the verse from Freeda had potential, but it just fell flat due to inconsistensies and it seemed forced enough to make me uncomfortable reading... The Flow was off too... It was hard to follow. Best line: And after this ‘tragedy’ - Dynasty will make sure it lives up to ‘statistics’- -

Dynasties all eventually fall... good punch, no explanation needed (maybe for the retards) The stalin quotes show you did your research, but those quotes never turned into anything hard. The "gave you pro" line was not very good for a finisher, but the rest of the verse was strong enough


Stalin's verse had one punch that was overused (even against me). The open mic shit is something even frank used vs Exo... Everything else flowed fine, seemed natural and hit hard.

All ya shit is stretched longer than Bob & Whitneys cocaine lines

very true... but the best line was:
fuck Freeda5th, Change ya name to Pleadda5th cuz u aint got shit to say



Vote: Stalin

Uppin for votes....

Stalin... good flow and rhymescheme...  A lot of the punches seemed too simple or unoriginal... but at least they hit the target...

Freeda5thDawg... rhymescheme suffered as you began by attempting too many internal-rhymes and not focusing on the punches...  Flow began well...  A lot of punches missed due to forced, long-winded wordplay... and the personals towards the end would have been more effective against the real Joseph Stalin...