Open Mic: Super Bowl Punday

 Post Reply Post Reply
Author
King Jehu View Drop Down
Veteran
Veteran
Avatar

Joined: 23 January 2004
Status: Offline
Points: 6088
Crew: Renegades

Text Rank: #4
Stats: 54-18-1
Form: WLWWWL
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote King Jehu Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Topic: Super Bowl Punday
    Posted: 09 February 2010 at 7:49am
I wrote this Sunday afternoon because it was the anniversary of the deaths of the two most underrated artists in their field, especially because of their influence. I was gonna write more, or write better, but that's what came out of 5 minutes of typing on my iPod.

Super Bowl Punday, run plays, some say
"He wasn't the best" and "there's only one Jay"
But like me, he wasn't just round, but well rounded
Sad that it's been ten years since his bell sounded
Fell sound asleep, heart gave out
obese dude with a flow, broke apart they doubts
Indelible, incredibe, every rapper was edible
Medical professionalism, flow unforgettable
Don't trip on how short his rap timeline is
Big pun's the reason why I rhyme like this
Syllables of rhymes, unkillable design
Book meant for class, I would fill it full of lines
And who can forget that this day's killa
When a day just like this we lost jay dilla
Producer that inspired beats like pun did rhymes
His mother by his deathbed, her son did fine
Now the talent lost in death is pittied a lot
Because hip hop has lost way more than just biggie and pac
Small towns dance to it, whole cities have rocked
Hip hop has lost more than just biggie and pac

Edited by King Jehu - 09 February 2010 at 7:54am
Insert something rappy here
Back to Top
$n00z View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member
Avatar

Joined: 06 February 2010
Location: NC
Status: Offline
Points: 1267
Crew: The Dynasty

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 11-7-0
Form: WWLWWL
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote $n00z Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 February 2010 at 8:02am
yessir.... i like this joint... gon an put a beat to it an make a full song. shit if u aint got one i'll make u one
U already know...
Back to Top
Alcatraz View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member
Avatar

Joined: 20 December 2009
Location: Maryland
Status: Offline
Points: 231

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 3-2-1
Form: LWWLWN
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Alcatraz Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 February 2010 at 9:33am
nice drop Jehu.... i really felt where you was goin wit this and ya prolly wit more time and effort it mighta been better but sometimes its what comes naturally thats the best and this is a good example of that.

this flowed real nice to me
Fell sound asleep, heart gave out 
obese dude with a flow, broke apart they doubts 
Indelible, incredibe, every rapper was edible 
Medical professionalism, flow unforgettable

and this killed it as a closer
Now the talent lost in death is pittied a lot 
Because hip hop has lost way more than just biggie and pac 
Small towns dance to it, whole cities have rocked 
Hip hop has lost more than just biggie and pac


keep droppin
Back to Top
Kiki Spirez View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member
Avatar

Joined: 30 December 2008
Location: Chesterfield
Status: Offline
Points: 4375
Crew: Kratos Kind

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 68-26-0
Form: WWWWLW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Kiki Spirez Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 February 2010 at 1:18pm
Fuckin sick piece mate..
 
How Pun gets so little mention is a mystery, he's got to be in the top 10 for flow, punchlines and delivery of all time.
Back to Top
Demonic View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member

X Fade II

Joined: 06 August 2004
Location: Cardiff
Status: Offline
Points: 3463
Crew: XFade: Phoenix

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 2-4-0
Form: LLWLLW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Demonic Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 February 2010 at 2:38pm
Awesome


Back to Top
NepentheZ View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member
Avatar
... { 26 } ...

Joined: 11 October 2004
Location: Yea..Cake. Man
Status: Offline
Points: 7727

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 40-32-1
Form: WWLWLW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote NepentheZ Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 February 2010 at 3:06pm
Great work.






I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...
Back to Top
Stalin View Drop Down
Site Moderator
Site Moderator
Avatar

Joined: 24 November 2003
Location: United States
Status: Offline
Points: 2599
Crew: Renegades

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 34-12-2
Form: LNWWLW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Stalin Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 February 2010 at 5:21pm
Pretty hot for a 5 minute key... Pun was one of the best..
 
Indelible, incredibe, every rapper was edible
Medical professionalism, flow unforgettable
 
That was real nice right there.
 
 
If u wouldve taken time on it, it wouldve been much better.. but still good how it is
Back to Top
-Orion- View Drop Down
Veteran
Veteran
Avatar

Joined: 08 April 2004
Location: DisturbinLondon
Status: Offline
Points: 9598
Crew: Renegades

Text Rank: #1
Stats: 90-4-1
Form: WWWWNW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote -Orion- Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 February 2010 at 9:10pm
Haha... my man

I like it
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
Back to Top
King Jehu View Drop Down
Veteran
Veteran
Avatar

Joined: 23 January 2004
Status: Offline
Points: 6088
Crew: Renegades

Text Rank: #4
Stats: 54-18-1
Form: WLWWWL
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote King Jehu Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 February 2010 at 4:30am
RIP Big L.
Insert something rappy here
Back to Top
-Orion- View Drop Down
Veteran
Veteran
Avatar

Joined: 08 April 2004
Location: DisturbinLondon
Status: Offline
Points: 9598
Crew: Renegades

Text Rank: #1
Stats: 90-4-1
Form: WWWWNW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote -Orion- Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 February 2010 at 12:13am
Yeah, I bumped a LOT of Big L today and in the past couple of days... so charismatic, awesome

I think it's great how in Renegades we had you on the Pun shit and Stalin on the L shit... guess we were missing the likes of Biggie and Pac
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
Back to Top
Calibra View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member
Avatar

Joined: 28 March 2008
Location: Newcastle, UK
Status: Offline
Points: 2969

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 20-3-1
Form: WWWWWN
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Calibra Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 February 2010 at 1:07am
...and a Calibra!
Back to Top
-Orion- View Drop Down
Veteran
Veteran
Avatar

Joined: 08 April 2004
Location: DisturbinLondon
Status: Offline
Points: 9598
Crew: Renegades

Text Rank: #1
Stats: 90-4-1
Form: WWWWNW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote -Orion- Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 February 2010 at 8:51pm
You got Renegades II going on... three of your seven
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
Back to Top
Calibra View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member
Avatar

Joined: 28 March 2008
Location: Newcastle, UK
Status: Offline
Points: 2969

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 20-3-1
Form: WWWWWN
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Calibra Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 February 2010 at 11:11am
Lol yeah, don't think I haven't had that thrown in my face before. Apparently im trying to recreate the Renegades...
Back to Top
Stalin View Drop Down
Site Moderator
Site Moderator
Avatar

Joined: 24 November 2003
Location: United States
Status: Offline
Points: 2599
Crew: Renegades

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 34-12-2
Form: LNWWLW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Stalin Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 February 2010 at 11:08pm

Anyone who said that is retarded Cal...

It's just not something u can recreate
Back to Top
SageOne View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member
Avatar

Joined: 12 June 2006
Location: At Your House
Status: Offline
Points: 2976

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 34-13-2
Form: WLWLLL
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote SageOne Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 February 2010 at 6:09am
i aint gonna lie this shit is dope.
You're on some fucking mf doom swag, the topic is smooth. mentioning dilla is always a classy move.
I can definitely dig how you tie in superbowls with death, it blends well and in the end you're just like....ok.

gitrdone
Back to Top
J Sass View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member
Avatar

Joined: 24 June 2009
Location: Omaha,Ne
Status: Offline
Points: 1918

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 12-7-3
Form: WWWNNN
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote J Sass Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 February 2010 at 6:40am

this shyt was fire...flow was on point...i fareal could hear it when i read it....nice shyt

 

Sass



Edited by J Sass - 22 February 2010 at 6:40am
Back to Top
 Post Reply Post Reply
  Share Topic   

Forum Jump Forum Permissions View Drop Down