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-Orion-
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Topic: The MessagePosted: 04 November 2007 at 7:28pm |
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This is it... Grand Slam Champeeon, damn peons... The next one WILL kill you... Edited by -Orion- - 04 November 2007 at 7:37pm |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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sparta
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Posted: 04 November 2007 at 7:35pm |
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Pretty mean piece of text here, never really let up, enjoyable to read...mcrae was ill, the rest of it was smoothly put together which made for an advanced piece of writing, a pleasure to read...
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 04 November 2007 at 7:37pm |
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Hot shit. dont take a scientist to figure out the culprits here. Some real dope bars, for sure. a few bars didnt flow/rhyme right, but all in all it was straight to the point and effective. Colin McCrae was off the hook, Second Mouse was hot too. Solid drop.
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Fatal
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Posted: 04 November 2007 at 7:48pm |
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Gotta agree wit nep and sparta...this was def hot...loved the aggressiveness of the verse bro...
But let the blind lead the blind, despite what's now apparent
Gotta put talent in power to empower talent ^Dope... Nice to see you writing again O... |
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lynxx
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Posted: 05 November 2007 at 7:10am |
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agree wit the other 3, this was a tight piece,
balls in ya mouth part made me laugh, sum great concepts in there...
nice drop.
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2smooth
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Posted: 05 November 2007 at 10:44am |
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so is this what "greats" do after they come back an' get beat? lmao... decent drop... have seen a lot better from you, perhaps you're still rusty...
had a couple nice punches/ plays... agression as said above was nice through out, also...
keep elevatin' man...
-2s Edited by 2smooth - 05 November 2007 at 10:50am |
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Posted: 05 November 2007 at 11:27am |
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I Hate The Way People Come Back An Immediately Get Feed, While There Is Other Open Mic's Around That Just Get Ignored
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Kay B
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Posted: 05 November 2007 at 11:35am |
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That's cause we all love adore and follow him...
Anyways.....Yeah as others have said dope drop, not your best but still better than 90% around here...nice drop *hops off* Edited by Kay B - 05 November 2007 at 11:36am |
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 05 November 2007 at 11:53am |
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To be honest, i thought this was a little above average at best. i aint gon ride when it aint due, u got better than this man.
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Freeda5thDawg
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Posted: 05 November 2007 at 12:33pm |
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let the next one kill us...this wasnt aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, jus a hehe...
always liked the style tho...great agression thruout... |
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Rameez
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Posted: 05 November 2007 at 12:35pm |
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N every1 like my opinion.. thank you..
Ya I like reading it, all ya text rhymed all the way, the points were crystal clear..But don't cry a river, if u hate some1 even thou ya "best" then battle em... teach him a lesson with ya text... Am I wrong? were u jus rapping for fun n don't mean it what ya said ? |
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 05 November 2007 at 1:00pm |
To be fair, you havant been around long enough to undersand most the shit in there.. |
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 05 November 2007 at 1:01pm |
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to be fair nepenthez i've been around since 2004 i used to be tigger and remember when you weren't nepenthez ;)
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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Rameez
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Posted: 05 November 2007 at 1:11pm |
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lol,
u 2 should battle, rather than fighting like kids. |
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 05 November 2007 at 1:13pm |
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Tigger... yea i remember you. but you had a leave of abscence. Why'd you have to come back as SS ... why not stick with tigger.....
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 05 November 2007 at 1:28pm |
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SS is the name i use on stage and on my album. Tigger is my dj name, so yeah. |
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Fatal
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Posted: 05 November 2007 at 6:43pm |
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Ok tig, how is it riding if some one likes a perticular drop? i personally thought it was a good verse, and certainly better than most of the verses lyin in open mic right now...i get where you comin from but i dont get where you see "riding" in this thread... |
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SkyFly
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Posted: 06 November 2007 at 6:30pm |
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it was tight, you started off hotter than u finished, u should jus go ahead and say who u talkin bout tho, let em kno feel me'
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_HolloW_
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Posted: 07 November 2007 at 2:52pm |
To be fair, SS, I've been doin' this shit since before you had any idea who "the real slim shady" was, an' this stuff's still pretty decent. I ain't gonna call it top-dawgin' nothin, 'cause in my eyes a few of the RHYMES fucked up the content of the bars.
The apparant/empower talent bar for one.... Good content, that shit was icy. But... dunno if it does with a Brit accent or whatever you got, but to me, that doesn't really have much more than a POSSIBLE slanted rhyme.
That aside, most your bars were better than most peoples, but only a couple in my mind were show stopper worthy.
Damn good piece, but from someone who has (or CLAIMS to have--I haven't really noticed yet) this place on lockdown, it didn't hold to the hype. Keep it up, though.
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Spent six months hurtin' who I shoulda been supportin'/
But I was nervous, I was stupid, I was pushin' for abortion/ |
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