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    Posted: 02 May 2013 at 7:05pm
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due tonight.
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how bout stop making new battles while duckin ours. 

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u suck!!!!
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Hello,
His names “TheSoulDrivenMind
The White man stole the Indians land.
I am White.
Take a quick glance at his avatar and signature.
Soul is dodging Fuckoffs battle, and he started the beef.


Annnd go time ...

If you’re reading this, take my advice ‘don’t be no silly fools.
Read it quickly, because my lyrics are known for killin ‘Souls’!
I steal your pride bitch! The Indians’ll have ta hang ya for mockery,
lookin like your avatar, talkin bout ”The white man has taken my property!”
Obviously, you know I’m real deal, how could you think I was a swindler?
Cos I aint on no gay shit, but when I'm done, you'll be sleepin with ya signature!
Can't even finish your verse for Fuck Off, you the type to talk hot and then duck.
Meet my fat hoe ‘I only let her suck, kid ya look like me the way ya dodgin a fuck.
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i just got home and im tired, if u allow me.
ill drop tommrow goodnight hating ass niggas!
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Sorry i got home late last night and was tired af.
just wrote this up tho.
 
his names sean game.
we dont know anything about him
where hes from or how old he is.
hes accused my bars of being bitten.
and now hes talking non sense.
 
 
you purposely have no personal info, why you aint got a sig mayne?
you a joke, all that shit you spit is just a 'big game'.
in person i would knock you out, stand over, spit and cough.
your a lame, even your avatar came alive to flip you off.
as for my battle with fuck, i dont wana waste my time,
thats like mike tyson fighting a boy thats nine..whos paralized and blind.
If you win, its because youve been around , your nice, and vote.
how can you suck so bad with that many posts?
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after reading both, as much as it shocks me i'll have to go with TSDM on this one...

going off the pure hilarity of verses as both of you have minimal information about you... safe to say Shawn TSDM took the complete piss outta you in a clowning style... the Avatar punch made me laugh, then the Fuckoff related line... that made me laugh out loud for real. 

Game you did your best with this battle but as far as i'm aware your verse lacked the killer sting if you allow me to say that, there were a fair few punches but nothing that took it for me

so on the clowning grounds of this battle

MVGT - TSDM
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V. SDM.

Big game, you came weak as fuck.
First of all, that intro was soooo corny when I read it. That's just my opinion.

Let's get down to the vote....


If you’re reading this, take my advice ‘don’t be no silly fools.
Read it quickly, because my lyrics are known for killin ‘Souls’!

was corny to me. Used the word "read" twice,just didn't like how you phrased it. expected a better opener from you. opener rating : 6/10 flow-- 5/10 punchline effect 5.5/10
I steal your pride bitch! The Indians’ll have ta hang ya for mockery,
lookin like your avatar, talkin bout ”The white man has taken my property!”

This was the only line in your verse I really liked. It was a good personal and hit good.
flow: 8/10-- punchline effect 7/10 lyrically 7/10
Obviously, you know I’m real deal, how could you think I was a swindler?
Cos I aint on no gay shit, but when I'm done, you'll be sleepin with ya signature!

You could of phrased this a lot better lyrically 6/10 flow 6.5/10 lyrically: 3.5/10 punchline effect: 6.5/10
Can't even finish your verse for Fuck Off, you the type to talk hot and then duck.
Meet my fat hoe ‘I only let her suck, kid ya look like me the way ya dodgin a fuck.

that was just awful. Lyrically : 5/10 flow-- 2.5/10 --punchline effect: 3.0/10 lyrically : 1/10
This might have been the line that secured SDM's victory. I felt this line was extremely corny, and he even dissed him. Had big not ko'ed himself with this line, he may have won.
Overall , it definitely looked like you developed the  better concepts, but still wasn't hitting hard enough.

where as.....soul drivens wasn't great either....but lets take his line by line (vibs perspective)

Sorry i got home late last night and was tired af.just wrote this up tho.
 
"his names sean game.
we dont know anything about him
where hes from or how old he is.
hes accused my bars of being bitten.
and now hes talking non sense."
This was pretty funny and got me interested to see what you had to say

you purposely have no personal info, why you aint got a sig mayne?
you a joke, all that shit you spit is just a 'big game'.
strong opener, felt like it hit harder than big's opener. was pretty funny, flow was tight, and he clowns big for not having a sig.
flow: 7/10 lyrically: 6/10-- punchline effect-- 6.5 /10

in person i would knock you out, stand over, spit and cough.
your a lame, even your avatar came alive to flip you off.
He seems to have the short bar approach going for him at this point. Very compact, but precise hit.
Flow: 7/10 Lyrically : 7/10 Punchline effect: 8/10
as for my battle with fuck, i dont wana waste my time,
thats like mike tyson fighting a boy thats nine..whos paralized and blind.
A nice little jab at fuck off, this is a pretty good personal, but wasn't direct enough. felt like this was his weakest line of the battle.
flow: 5/10--LYrically: 5/10 Punchline effect 5/10
If you win, its because youve been around , your nice, and vote.
how can you suck so bad with that many posts?
At this point, it was pretty clear to me who won.
This was a short little concept but it flowed good, just like the rest of his verse.

CONCLUSION: This winded up being a battle that big slept on big time and sacrificed flow for the sake of making pretty weak concepts, that didn't hurt his opponent much at all. Where as Soul had nice little compact punches that flowed well, and  were consistent and personal enough to do the most damage.


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Well first off the Fuck Off bar was a flip, which he stated not to do.
And on the real, you two must be either drunk or mad....smh
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IT WAS NOT A FLIP. YOU SAID THAT LIKE IN 10 DIFFERENT POSTS
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why you hating big game.
dont be disrespecting them like that.
you mentioned that i was dodging fuck off before dog.
tht was no flip, trust me.
stop tryna make me look bad
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Show me one instant that I said anything about you ducking Fuck Off outside of this battle and I'll drop the matter right here and now.



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idk im not guna search for  post.
but i did it because fuckoff posted that picture.
its a coincidence that you said it tho.
worked to my advantage.
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BEAKDOWNS - wait until i've posted BG's to comment 


you purposely have no personal info, why you aint got a sig mayne?
you a joke, all that shit you spit is just a 'big game'.
5/10 - so overplayed its not even funny
in person i would knock you out, stand over, spit and cough.
your a lame, even your avatar came alive to flip you off.
8/10 - real effective with this one
as for my battle with fuck, i dont wana waste my time,
thats like mike tyson fighting a boy thats nine..whos paralized and blind.
6/10 - funny but over-all not a big hit 
If you win, its because youve been around , your nice, and vote.
how can you suck so bad with that many posts?
4/10 - filler

23/40 
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Though you never even had the chance to witness it
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BG..

If you’re reading this, take my advice ‘don’t be no silly fools.
Read it quickly, because my lyrics are known for killin ‘Souls’!
5/10 - basic name flip, its only a 6 because it hasn't been used yet on him.. that's only because he's new though. Like i said, its basic.. a concept you think of immediately when you see his name
I steal your pride bitch! The Indians’ll have ta hang ya for mockery,
lookin like your avatar, talkin bout ”The white man has taken my property!”
6/10 - stronger concept here, you could have wired this to do much more damaged though
Obviously, you know I’m real deal, how could you think I was a swindler?
Cos I aint on no gay shit, but when I'm done, you'll be sleepin with ya signature!
7/10 - ahhhh... cold man, i love Marley.. but nice punch here
Can't even finish your verse for Fuck Off, you the type to talk hot and then duck.
Meet my fat hoe ‘I only let her suck, kid ya look like me the way ya dodgin a fuck.
4/10 - nah bro the points just aren't there in this bar

22/40 


 
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