Open Mic: The Message

 Post Reply Post Reply
Author
-Orion- View Drop Down
Veteran
Veteran
Avatar

Joined: 08 April 2004
Location: DisturbinLondon
Status: Offline
Points: 9598
Crew: Renegades

Text Rank: #1
Stats: 90-4-1
Form: WWWWNW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote -Orion- Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Topic: The Message
    Posted: 04 November 2007 at 7:28pm

This is it...

Grand Slam Champeeon, damn peons...
I retired text tag an' topical...ya can't see 'em
I held 'em all at once, wit' no jugglin'
Yet these disrespectful kids STILL think they can fuck wit' him
I ain't sayin' I'm the best, that'd be absurd, but
I'm better than you, ya friends, and anyone they heard of
Murda, only thing that's ever stopped my shit is politics
But eryone, every time, KNOWS who the hottest is
But let the blind lead the blind, despite what's now apparent
Gotta put talent in power to empower talent
I did it before an' I could do it again
But it ain't worth it now, it's too ruined to mend
Ya ain't the truest of men, 'cuz I'm seein' quite a difference
When you get emotional moodswings with mighty quickness
I ain't sayin' names, na, I won't write my shit-list
I'm on Another Level, but I don't Get Freaky with these type of bitches
Past or present, you as bad as each other now
Two of the oldest are two of the biggest fuckin' clowns
So I ain't hatin' on the newschool, it's deeper than that
Jealous losers be the ones who planted seeds of collapse
Bad habits, crazy envy, power-mad and possessive
Intimidated kids were hatin' 'cuz they couldn't accept it
Now, you won't get paper or respect or somethin'
You two bitches think you got it but you've been left with nothin'
So keep ya bandwagons for now, I'll letchu have it
But don't think I accept or respect you faggots
Shit, I'll knock 'em off the wagon if and when I choose
'Cuz I got shots more intoxicating than any booze
Plenty fools test the dude and get wrecked, left in two
Said I'm the best they ever saw, now they talkin' like they better? Naw...
Rollin' in cliques, the motherfuckas think they rugged now
2s company, but I ain't misery, so fuck 'em clowns
I'll leave it with them puppets, 'cuz they ain't takin' me on
Still stuck here 'cuz you can't make it beyond... (and that's real)
Yet they ryde each others' dick, it's like they probly fag
Leftovers...they should call themselves tha Doggybag
Yet they gon' be gassed, jus' 'cuz they like to shout
But when it happens I'ma take Jew care...it'll wipe 'em out
Face it, you love to hate it, but the kid is blessed
Ahead of everyone, 'cuz you know I did it best
I'ma rip ya balls out, an' put 'em in ya mouth
Then maybe next time you SPIT I might get HIT with a TEST!...
You like Colin McCrae wit' ya skills too
Might have the drive, but if you try to be fly, it'll kill you
You can shoot first or second when you joustin' wit' me
Early bird gets the worm, second mouse gets the cheese
Either way, ya out of it chump...
Sendin' shots to bitches, so if they respond you know they bound to get fucked
'Cuz if I ain't Don of this shit, I'm the closest one
Frank Lucas and White, all rolled in one
More flows to come? If it's gotta be done...
If you think I'm gettin' at you, I probably was...

The next one WILL kill you...


Edited by -Orion- - 04 November 2007 at 7:37pm
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
Back to Top
sparta View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member
Avatar
..Палач..

Joined: 20 June 2006
Location: Volgograd, RUS
Status: Offline
Points: 2401
Crew: The Dynasty

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 37-13-2
Form: LWWLLL
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote sparta Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 November 2007 at 7:35pm
Pretty mean piece of text here, never really let up, enjoyable to read...mcrae was ill, the rest of it was smoothly put together which made for an advanced piece of writing, a pleasure to read...
Не все потеряно пока...
Back to Top
NepentheZ View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member
Avatar
... { 26 } ...

Joined: 11 October 2004
Location: Yea..Cake. Man
Status: Offline
Points: 7727

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 40-32-1
Form: WWLWLW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote NepentheZ Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 November 2007 at 7:37pm
Hot shit. dont take a scientist to figure out the culprits here. Some real dope bars, for sure. a few bars didnt flow/rhyme right, but all in all it was straight to the point and effective. Colin McCrae was off the hook, Second Mouse was hot too. Solid drop.



Eaaaasyyy






I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...
Back to Top
Fatal View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member
Avatar
...Wicked Wit Wordplay...

Joined: 08 March 2005
Location: Chicago
Status: Offline
Points: 6441
Crew: The Dynasty

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 44-4-2
Form: WNNWWW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Fatal Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 November 2007 at 7:48pm
Gotta agree wit nep and sparta...this was def hot...loved the aggressiveness of the verse bro...
But let the blind lead the blind, despite what's now apparent
Gotta put talent in power to empower talent
^Dope...

Nice to see you writing again O...
Back to Top
lynxx View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member


Joined: 03 February 2007
Location: United Kingdom
Status: Offline
Points: 417

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 2-2-0
Form: LLWW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote lynxx Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2007 at 7:10am
agree wit the other 3, this was a tight piece,
balls in ya mouth part made me laugh, sum great concepts in there...
nice drop.
Back to Top
2smooth View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member


Joined: 25 October 2004
Status: Offline
Points: 1930

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 36-5-2
Form: WWWWNW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote 2smooth Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2007 at 10:44am

so is this what "greats" do after they come back an' get beat? lmao...

decent drop... have seen a lot better from you, perhaps you're still rusty...
 
had a couple nice punches/ plays... agression as said above was nice through out, also...
 
keep elevatin' man...
 
-2s


Edited by 2smooth - 05 November 2007 at 10:50am
Back to Top
Point Blank View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member


Joined: 20 May 2005
Status: Offline
Points: 7234

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 92-27-5
Form: WWNWWN
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Point Blank Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2007 at 11:27am
I Hate The Way People Come Back An Immediately Get Feed, While There Is Other Open Mic's Around That Just Get Ignored

Smh...
Back to Top
Kay B View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member


Joined: 28 June 2005
Location: Watford
Status: Offline
Points: 9428
Crew: Lyricist Inc.

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 58-32-0
Form: LLWWWW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Kay B Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2007 at 11:35am
That's cause we all love adore and follow him...

Anyways.....Yeah as others have said dope drop, not your best but still better than 90% around here...nice drop

*hops off*




Edited by Kay B - 05 November 2007 at 11:36am
Back to Top
SwordedStylez View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member


Joined: 16 August 2007
Location: UK
Status: Offline
Points: 4922

Audio Rank: Unranked
Stats: 3-0-1
Form: WWWN
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote SwordedStylez Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2007 at 11:53am
To be honest, i thought this was a little above average at best. i aint gon ride when it aint due, u got better than this man.
Music

Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's)
Back to Top
Freeda5thDawg View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member
Avatar

Joined: 19 June 2006
Status: Offline
Points: 1324
Crew: Lyricist Inc.

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 5-1-0
Form: WWWLWW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Freeda5thDawg Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2007 at 12:33pm
let the next one kill us...this wasnt aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, jus a hehe...

always liked the style tho...great agression thruout...
Back to Top
Rameez View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member
Avatar

Joined: 31 July 2007
Location: Brampton, CDN
Status: Offline
Points: 3922

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 22-40-4
Form: NWWWWW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Rameez Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2007 at 12:35pm
N every1 like my opinion.. thank you..

Ya I like reading it, all ya text rhymed all the way, the points were crystal clear..But don't cry a river, if u hate some1 even thou ya "best" then battle em... teach him a lesson with ya text... Am I wrong? were u jus rapping for fun n don't mean it what ya saidConfused?
Back to Top
NepentheZ View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member
Avatar
... { 26 } ...

Joined: 11 October 2004
Location: Yea..Cake. Man
Status: Offline
Points: 7727

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 40-32-1
Form: WWLWLW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote NepentheZ Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2007 at 1:00pm
Originally posted by SwordedStylez SwordedStylez wrote:

To be honest, i thought this was a little above average at best. i aint gon ride when it aint due, u got better than this man.


To be fair, you havant been around long enough to undersand most the shit in there..






I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...
Back to Top
SwordedStylez View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member


Joined: 16 August 2007
Location: UK
Status: Offline
Points: 4922

Audio Rank: Unranked
Stats: 3-0-1
Form: WWWN
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote SwordedStylez Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2007 at 1:01pm
to be fair nepenthez i've been around since 2004 i used to be tigger and remember when you weren't nepenthez ;)
Music

Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's)
Back to Top
Rameez View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member
Avatar

Joined: 31 July 2007
Location: Brampton, CDN
Status: Offline
Points: 3922

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 22-40-4
Form: NWWWWW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Rameez Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2007 at 1:11pm
lol,
u 2 should battle, rather than fighting like kids.
Back to Top
NepentheZ View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member
Avatar
... { 26 } ...

Joined: 11 October 2004
Location: Yea..Cake. Man
Status: Offline
Points: 7727

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 40-32-1
Form: WWLWLW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote NepentheZ Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2007 at 1:13pm
Tigger... yea i remember you. but you had a leave of abscence. Why'd you have to come back as SS ... why not stick with tigger.....







I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...
Back to Top
SwordedStylez View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member


Joined: 16 August 2007
Location: UK
Status: Offline
Points: 4922

Audio Rank: Unranked
Stats: 3-0-1
Form: WWWN
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote SwordedStylez Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2007 at 1:28pm

SS is the name i use on stage and on my album. Tigger is my dj name, so yeah.

Music

Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's)
Back to Top
Fatal View Drop Down
Superior Member
Superior Member
Avatar
...Wicked Wit Wordplay...

Joined: 08 March 2005
Location: Chicago
Status: Offline
Points: 6441
Crew: The Dynasty

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 44-4-2
Form: WNNWWW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Fatal Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2007 at 6:43pm

Ok tig, how is it riding if some one likes a perticular drop? i personally thought it was a good verse, and certainly better than most of the verses lyin in open mic right now...i get where you comin from but i dont get where you see "riding" in this thread...

Back to Top
SkyFly View Drop Down
Newbie
Newbie
Avatar

Joined: 06 November 2007
Location: Miami
Status: Offline
Points: 16
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote SkyFly Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 November 2007 at 6:30pm
it was tight, you started off hotter than u finished, u should jus go ahead and say who u talkin bout tho, let em kno feel me'
D.A.D.E
Back to Top
_HolloW_ View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member
Avatar

Joined: 01 April 2007
Location: Ask me
Status: Offline
Points: 278

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 1-2-0
Form: LWL
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote _HolloW_ Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 November 2007 at 2:52pm
Originally posted by SwordedStylez SwordedStylez wrote:

to be fair nepenthez i've been around since 2004 i used to be tigger and remember when you weren't nepenthez ;)
 
 
To be fair, SS, I've been doin' this shit since before you had any idea who "the real slim shady" was, an' this stuff's still pretty decent.  I ain't gonna call it top-dawgin' nothin, 'cause in my eyes a few of the RHYMES fucked up the content of the bars. 
 
The apparant/empower talent bar for one....  Good content, that shit was icy.  But...  dunno if it does with a Brit accent or whatever you got, but to me, that doesn't really have much more than a POSSIBLE slanted rhyme.
 
That aside, most your bars were better than most peoples, but only a couple in my mind were show stopper worthy.
 
 
Damn good piece, but from someone who has (or CLAIMS to have--I haven't really noticed yet) this place on lockdown, it didn't hold to the hype.  Keep it up, though.
Spent six months hurtin' who I shoulda been supportin'/
But I was nervous, I was stupid, I was pushin' for abortion/
Back to Top
 Post Reply Post Reply
  Share Topic   

Forum Jump Forum Permissions View Drop Down