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Topic: Because I Can...Posted: 24 December 2007 at 2:10pm |
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I hate haters, they sayin i deserve the sack
But fair play, even i'll admit im really, rarely wack So call me what u want, i'll keep defeatin ya men though Coz im LA's biggest feature this xmas, like the wii to nintendo An when i write a verse, i can get any rapper sent to hell Because my 'post get's in your way', like to hatton when he fell An thats due to the fact i post the tightest raps, son! I'll leave you with more plasters on ya face than fuckin micheal jackson! Testosterone controllin me, my sacks fatter than santas! Anger makes me climb up ya family tree an start snappin the branches Im savage and im just tryna rep the hardest Watch me put a big price on ya head like an expensive barbers All the men that watch are standin back astounded, And THATS why im that kid ya mom won't let u hang around with.... |
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CHAIN
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Posted: 24 December 2007 at 4:57pm |
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Testosterone controllin me, my sacks fatter than santas! All the men that watch are standin back astounded, And THATS why im that kid ya mom won't let u hang around with.... Edited by CHAIN - 24 December 2007 at 5:00pm |
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Freeda5thDawg
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Posted: 24 December 2007 at 5:00pm |
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lol, this was nice...nice flow throughout...some koo lines made an enjoyable read...i liked the way the santas/branches couple was delivered...the way i flowed wit da verse, the whole thing sounded aggressive and demandin if ya kno wat i mean...nice shit man...
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mcwoods
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Posted: 24 December 2007 at 5:17pm |
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yeah, i know what freeda means, kinda like the unbitten 16 one
branch line was really memorable, good play and well executed flow tight, nice plays and worded well, drop more man lol |
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SiNiStAh
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Posted: 24 December 2007 at 5:28pm |
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Testosterone controllin me, my sacks fatter than santas!
Anger makes me climb up ya family tree an start snappin the branches ^^best line, MADE the verse.. hands down, hope-est line there.. |
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..Sin, The Boi Unforgiven..
..Im A Lethal Weapon On Mics Lik'a Mel Gibson Interview.. |
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DressToKill
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Posted: 24 December 2007 at 5:57pm |
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Haha nice shit point..I have to agree the familly tree bar was dope nice..you also had some decent lines even though I wasnt feelin some plays..keep up
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The original comeback kid
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Fatal
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Posted: 24 December 2007 at 6:26pm |
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Nice verse P...couple nice lines in there....keep droppin
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GraphicKontent
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Posted: 26 December 2007 at 3:11pm |
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Testosterone controllin me, my sacks fatter than santas!
Anger makes me climb up ya family tree an start snappin the branches ^Very creative... this piece flowed nice.. nice multies and a few gud punches and lines.. overall it was a gud piece.. nice. but man how many times are yu gonna use " So call me what u want, i'll keep defeatin ya men though Coz im LA's biggest feature this xmas, like the wii to nintendo" U used it twice on HHE.. lol.. Edited by GraphicKontent - 26 December 2007 at 3:12pm |
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I-kontinue
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Posted: 26 December 2007 at 3:24pm |
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An when i write a verse, i can get any rapper sent to hell
Because my 'post get's in your way', like to hatton when he fell Ha, that was slick. You showed me the snappin the branches line on MSN... Stay up. |
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