Open Mic: A Thought

Here comes a breath of fresh air with the scent that death’s here- -
As I step and get near this wretched mess of set fear- -
I was blessed to press peers through the depths of swept prayers...
That were left with wept tears drenched and wet the next year- -
Now I rest the stress clear with the strength and less beer- -
Was depressed to then hear he was sentenced ten years- -
Why do lessons end weird - Usually to put me deep...
Right through between a soothing beat and bullets pleading “shoot me please”- -
Thought I WAS a stupid teen - Nothing’s new it seems- -
Still putting scenes of ruthless beatings since I drew with ink- -
Glued to these conclusive means - Of taking someone’s life- -
Or raping someone’s wife - Though it made me someone’s might- -
Still awaking under night - Kneel and pray for summer light- -
Till I’m taken up to play - Will I break and run or fight?- -
Fill his brain or punch his sight? - Kill this pain? The gun is right- -
Tilt the blade and plunge the knife - Peel the vein and blood ignites- -
Feel the strain and fuck the fright - Seal the page as one’ll write...
Healin’ rain the tongue recites - Spills the hate and love for life- -
Still evade from what is right - I’m the dying rebel- -
At a rhyming level that’s been flying through defying revels- -
Trying to revive this hell of life from lying devils- -
Complying mental science, help the crying settle- -
Silence metal-type appliances till violence is at peace- -
Signing this design of scripts and rhymes defining us as free- -
Instant vibrance when I speak - Piston heightens in the speed- -
Fists beside the lips and tie the spit with fire mixed degrees-
Gifts acquired and inquired as a choir when it sings- -
It’s the sire mixed-messiah lit the pyres in the sheets- -
Pistol-riot twist and binded with the iris fit in snipers...
Drippin’ viper-liquids biting blissful tyrants in this piece- -
Please...I’ve been through the worst....- -
....Sin through this verse cause I’m Him in reverse- -
...now...
I was nimble and cursed...from the insults that hurt- -
Till I swindled some herbs...with the impulse that burns- -
Now I limp over words...slurring facts, erasing pain- -
Burning tracks: Amazing Grace - Learning that is pays to train- -
Wording gats from page to page - Turning raps to flames and blades- -
Surely that’s the way in age to earning stats and gain a name- -
Murder masses, stating claims - Burners blast the place I reign- -
The working class, it ain’t a thing to burst and clash and break and slay- -
Bury bastards, they will lay in dirty caskets praying they...
Could hurdle back to face the greatest person kats engaged afraid- -
Thinking they...Earned the chains, the pearls, the cash and fame attained- -
The fury, wrath, and rage I drain is Pearly past the painted gates- -
This world is captive, caged, enslaved and burned to ashes raining grains- -
Earthly fragment-plains explains the burning passion trait engraved...
Eternal AS inferno trapped internal wrapped in verbal game- -
And attached to herbal haze - In a massive circle, placed...
In the heart of a genius who writes as far as the seasons...
The seas, his scars, and the feces and garbage varnishing streets with...
Departures, the pardons, the arson and carcasses leaping...
Feets from the cars when the heat is bizarre with its speeches- -
So try to keep up when Free spits...the art of the thesis- -
Cause as far as the peace is - It’s martyr to reach it- -
It’s harder to eat this...And swallow the pieces- -
Or did you even get why I even bothered to leak this?...

Shit homes, flow and multis were fuckin off the hook. Vast vocabulary there and the message was conveyed immaculately. I would go as far as saying this is a flawless piece. 10/10.

Dope as normal, even though i give the same feed EVERY TIME on your pieces they never get boring to read or feed (dope rhyming there) General content alone is enough to shit on half this site let alone the fact it had immense flow throughout the whole thing....dope shit man, as impressive as normal

Wow.

That's mad impressive.

Someday i'm just going to take the time to read back through your older drops, too, and maybe i'll learn something from it! Haha!

Fuckin' dope, 5th!

I knowticed that too actually..But I didnt know if it was just me?Seems some content was lacked for rhyming purposes..none the less the rhyming was dope..

It's cool man, I aint hatin, as I say, i'm a big fan of yours. Just some of it didn't seem to make sense to me, fair enough if it makes sense to you, I can fully appreciate that in writing, just the syntax/obscurity of your words in this one left me feeling like it was too up in the air when it came to it actually bein about somethin. AS I say, no hate, the only reason I'm replyin is so you know that because i'm a fan and I rate you, so I don't want you to think I'm needlessly hatin on you or nuttin. Just tryna give good feedback.