Open Mic: Blind Faith

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   Trying something a little different here, open your eyes and your minds!

Dear reader,
If this ever gets political
Im President of syllables
Eloquent and visable
As relevant and lyrical
Intelligent, invincible
This blessin' isnt spiritual
My effort is as physical
As wrestlers in interviews
Heaven is the interlude 
For Hell that we are livin' through
Confession with a sinner proves 
You'll never cleanse the inner you
I'll never get religion too 
Both Testimants are fictional
Lacks evidence and simple truths
From messin' with originals
The Reverends would pick & choose
The text that's in the written books
Edited so it would suit 
The messages they wished to use
Im pressured into spittin' proof
And end it with initials too...
Your Sincerely
M.J.S

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Calibra Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote Calibra Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Blind Faith Posted: 03 June 2009 at 11:47am
	Trying something a little different here, open your eyes and your minds! Dear reader, If this ever gets political Im President of syllables Eloquent and visable As relevant and lyrical Intelligent, invincible This blessin' isnt spiritual My effort is as physical As wrestlers in interviews Heaven is the interlude For Hell that we are livin' through Confession with a sinner proves You'll never cleanse the inner you I'll never get religion too Both Testimants are fictional Lacks evidence and simple truths From messin' with originals The Reverends would pick & choose The text that's in the written books Edited so it would suit The messages they wished to use Im pressured into spittin' proof And end it with initials too... Your Sincerely M.J.S

Junior Shade Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Junior Shade Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 03 June 2009 at 3:22pm
	Haha... This is ill.. Great flow.. The set up reminds me of a Cuba piece awhile back where his line's where mega short but flowed awesome.. Props bro'.. You know the drill..

NepentheZ Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote NepentheZ Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 03 June 2009 at 4:29pm
	yeah man, that was hot. Flowed brilliant, unique, great message, didn't just start throwin' in random words to make it flow either. Good shit man. You're fast becoming one of the best textcee's on this site. Keep up the good work.
	I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...

Higgs Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 02 June 2009 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 78 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-3-1 Form: LLLN	Post Options Post Reply Quote Higgs Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 03 June 2009 at 6:25pm
	I liked the concept; addressing the readers. Nice vocabulary, interesting rhyme scheme, went aaaaaaabab so there's an appropriate change up that flowed nicely. I'm looking forward to checking out some more pieces from you.

Exoduzt Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member NaCl Joined: 08 April 2006 Location: Long Island Status: Offline Points: 5331 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 41-7-5 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Exoduzt Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 04 June 2009 at 1:39am
	ha...this was nice....the flow was outstanding...i would of liked this to be a bit longer but this was still pretty sick...nice to see a different rhyme scheme for once...


CHAIN Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote CHAIN Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 04 June 2009 at 2:24pm
	shit was da troof, u already know

Cuba Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12332 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Cuba Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 04 June 2009 at 3:57pm
	Sick.


Kay B Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kay B Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 06 June 2009 at 12:46am
	Dope as everyone has said im too lazy to re-type everything u know it was dope